Reviews for Shift
CaitlinEA chapter 8 . 5/6/2015
Please update :(
Guest chapter 8 . 12/24/2014
Still don't know what the relationship between Nicholas and Teagan is, but both their personalities are absolutely lovable. And the plot too!
You've really got me hating on her family. Nice, ha ha. Hope you'll pick this up again one day )
CaitlinEA chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I went back and looked at my reviews from years ago...They're just wow :O Such vulgar language I used. Anyways, this story has been on my mind since your last update (4 years ago) in the hopes that you'd update/finish it. I really want to know how it plays out. Please, please, PLEASE continue it :)
ThouArtLuv chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
darkthoughts666 chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
i love this story so far, it has a good plot line, but i also can't wait to see the rewritten version of it and i hope that you have the time to update it soon!
J.L. Lofthouse chapter 8 . 7/5/2011
I really like this story and want to read more! I just wish she would explode ready and make her dad terrified of her and get him to realise what an idiot he is please please please update soon :)
sweetpea265 chapter 7 . 5/3/2011
I really hope you can pick this back up soon. Maybe if you are doing a little bit of a re-write you can add some of Nicholas's point of view into the story and build up his character a little bit. As the story is now, it's pretty good, but Nicholas is still quite a mystery. It seemed a little like Drake came out of nowhere though. If you add a couple of paragraphs explaining how Drake was sent to get to know her or something it would be less confusing. Though, I may have just read it wrong. I even think if you just had a couple of bits in Nicholas's POV in the beginning chapter and then when they meet when she's older (just when he's in the scenes) then that would leave the door open to add his point of view later on when he's actually part of the scenes without looking too crazy and out of nowhere. If you do it that way you don't really have to re-work it too much.

Keep in mind this is just my opinion and I think it's already better than anything I could have ever come up with :)
sweetpea265 chapter 8 . 5/3/2011
Aw. Really hope you can pick this back up soon. Really enjoying it!
sweetpea265 chapter 3 . 5/3/2011
Really liking this story so far.
xofallenangelxx chapter 8 . 1/25/2011
Awesome update soon!
smurf-love chapter 8 . 1/12/2011
i honeslty really like this story, i feel bad that you havent writen anything on it in almost a year. i hope you continue this story because it really is good and i like the way its going even if you dont.

just know that some people out here really like this story and hope you keep writing no matter what other people say
Moon Witch '96 chapter 8 . 10/7/2010
Hey, 1st time reviwing the story, love it! im gonna miss they way the story is going if u rewrite it...( Anyway I LOVE IT!

~Moon Witch 13
DefineVintage chapter 8 . 7/23/2010
wow, this story is great :D I love Nicholas' and Teagan's relationship :) I see you haven't updated since your author's note, but after all, you have a life, so I'll just put this on alerts and squeal if it gets updated :)
SkinandBones chapter 8 . 7/18/2010
Awsome story so far! Please keep it going!
Mags2110 chapter 8 . 6/27/2010
Love the story so far.

Too bad school gets in the way, but I know how that feels.

I really enjoy how Nicholas is always mysterious. It's hot.

And when I'm reading, I actually feel sorry for the characters, which is always an accomplishment for a writer. :)
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