Reviews for Taken Over Me
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This is very good, I like the way you put this together because it is a really cohesive (not sure that's the word) single piece.

SpottedStar chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Wow, I can relate. I really like how this flowed and how you kinda kept us wondering until the end. Great job!
waitingforwhatever chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
This is a powerful poem. It's short but it says so much. Good job!
Isca chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
"I can only die inside." Wow, the pain and angst here is definitely vivid.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
wow, this sounds realistic (as in, a really depressed person talking)..

The words have a flow, and they're deep...

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