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I really wish you would continue this story. I thought it was pretty awesome, and you can take it so many places. Anyways, I enjoyed reading it, and when I got to the end I was a little disappointed I couldn't read more :)

Ahem. Well this is the first review that I have left in like four months... so its going to be quite long and probably entertaining to read because I LOVE to talk and this was a freakin amazing story that, quite personally, should be made into a story!

No joke.

It is a really good story line and even though it was a competition, it would be probably my most favorite book on this website. And there are a lot of good one here... so I'm thinking, and I highly doubt that I am the only one thinking this...

Althought this review seems to be really really late... But I hope that you don't mind!

I'm liking the main character Erin, just because she has one of THOSE personalities that so many people try to write but very few can really get perfect. And you pretty well damn did it!

Sory, I just had coffee with Pringles and I guess that those are not a good match for me!

I hope that you do end up putting this into a real story and not just a one-shot b/c this could go so much further if you did decide to do that...

Well, I shall stop wierding you out and just move on! My bad..

I hope that you have a lovely day/night/afternoon/ whatever time frame you may be currently residing in.

:)

AWESOME! I LOVE it! Dramatic, funny, kick-ass, non-sparkly vampires! (I'm an anti-sparkly vampire person.) I really hope you write more, or a sequel, or something!

Was it just me, or was that a Lost Boys reference there hiding in the line about a 'goddamned bloodsucking vampire'?

*ahem* I mean, I think my geek is showing. This was pure, unadulterated awesome.

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dude thish is too good to be a one shot! continue it!

I love this story, it would be great if you would consider turning this into a novel or writing a sequel, I'd love to find out more about the goings on after the pictures were sent to her.

WOW! I love this! Are going to continue this?

this is really good. is there a continuation?

will there be more?