|Reviews for five fingered foggy windows|
| D. Cowman chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
The way you tied it all up, "i'm having/a bad day/relatively". Perfect. All this self pity. It's funny that the love interest was described as warm and yet uncommunicative; "you can be in love and speechless"
Your electric wire metaphor hit home pretty hard. As did the bits about being a leech. I want you to write a book, just for me to read