Reviews for Personal Bias
K chapter 1 . 11/20/2022
I love this
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2020
that was amazing truly amazing
j0rja chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
Aw, I love this so much
R chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
First of all, let me just say that you write so well! You have a way with words that kind of reminds me of Rainbow Rowell, and I wouldn't be surprised if you became the next big YA contemporary author or something. Secondly, I loved the plot of this story! I felt like it flowed really smoothly and it wasn't too long or too rushed, ya feel? HAHA but I would've liked to have read about the progression of the relationship between Julia and Kevin. I'm a sucker for those "enemies turned to lovers" cliches, and I think, especially with your writing prowess, I would have really enjoyed and appreciated if you narrated scenes with them slowly falling for each other.

Nevertheless, this was still a fantastic piece! I'm looking forward to your future works! xx
Be-U-tiful chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
Aww this was so cute! Loved it :)
xEchoxInfernox chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Ha, very cute, such warm fuzzies while reading this.
N1GHT.stArs chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Love the edited version! I read this when I need a little romance pick-me-up :)

One correction: When Julie tells her sister she will be "outside the Lincoln Center," it should actually just read "I'll be outside Lincoln Center." I have never heard residents say "the" in front of Lincoln Center, although we obviously say "the" before all other sites and institutions.
Moon Sage chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
One less idiot of a politician the better. xD
J chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
This was really good :). Well written, and your characters are really likeable :)
Intangible Muse chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Wow, that was fantastic. You made me want to (or actually) squeal and spasm in happiness at some points. Great idea for the characters and backstory: I think that these two were the strongest points in the story. The love-hate relationship was well fleshed out and the backstory was both believable and heart-breaking. It's great that they have flaws and regrets that are so emotionally raw. I especially loved Julia's character; both her personality and dialogue (both inner and outer) made her a likeable person. The chemistry between Julia and Kevin is perfect and I love the tension between them at the beginning. Mr. Dryer was also the perfect fatherly figure and he works well for the story.
The only criticism I have is that the apology and reversal in Kevin's character was abrupt. I think his character could have done with a bit of time between their confrontation when Julia storms out and his apology. You did expand on the fact that they still argued after his apology, but perhaps also showing that might (instead of the large time lapse) have helped his character change be more realistic.
Otherwise, everything is wonderfully done! Great job and I hope you keep on writing!
Avide chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Like it. Respectfully, I'd like to add, though, that I wonder if there's enough substance to the relationship for me to believe they've fallen even a little in love, but clearly something was building up to that confession, so...over all, I do like the story and Jules, Kevin and Dryer. Also, the description of Kevin's novel.
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Awww! Awesome! It's so well written and creative! I like the background in why they hate each other, it's an awesome reason. Love it!
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
wow dis was DROOL worthy one shot trully BEAUTIFUL :) may be short stry would have done no harm neverless BANG ON
youngin-matomon chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
That was BRILLIANTLY written. Fucking amazing prose, seriously. You can't be an amateur writer, possibly. Did you have training?

That was an amazing piece of work. I love the characters, although I would have liked a little more embellishment of the minor characters - because your writing is good enough for me to want more plot padding - and give them a more important role. Like Jill, for example. I would have liked to see a bit of her character.

But still, great story. Really. Kudos to you.
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