SO Awesome!

Very nice! I like.

The only bit of CC I can see to give:

Kevin's transition from an asshole filled with hostility toward Julia to a repentant and grateful, overall decent guy, seems a little sudden. Like, there could have been more development there. I guess maybe it's because we don't get the full view of Kevin's conversation with Mr. Dryer. I don't know.

But, that aside, great story! Keep up the good work.

*sniff* i knew that it couldn't have lasted forever because it was for a challenge but gosh i so dearly wanted it to.

when i got to the break and then the book had already finished it's editing process i was like AH.

but in spite of that, this was a gorgeous piece.

This was a great story. I loved the fact that, unlike the usual FP stories, Julia and Kevin had no romantic history. That desire to know what actually happened between them really drew me through to the point when Kevin apologised. After that I just HAD to know how it ended for them.

This was so well-written and the characters and their motivations were perfect. I always felt sorry for Julia and I really hated Kevin...until he apologised. After that, I couldn't help but love him, at least a little bit. And then the book dedication! Aw! That just sealed the deal for me.

Great, great story. Very enjoyable to read.

~LK1512~

You're so talented! I love this and while I always appreciate the deluge of stories the prompts encourage, no one comes close to your talent level. Very, very good and it's nice to see that the types of hate they overcome aren't the cliched cheating variety. Thanks again!

That was really sweet. And convincing.

Damn, I'll probably leave you the most boring review ever, but all I wanted to tell you was that it was very good & well written. Congrats!

That was lovely - just the start i needed before doing my schoolwork.

I love how you're one of the few authors on here that could develop a relationship that well within one chapter.

Always a fan

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