i love this. short yet sweet 3

:D love it.

I'm currently cranking through your stories and I have fallen in love with "Personal Bias." You really know how to pull at a girl's heartstrings, and I truly empathized with Julia throughout the ordeal. I loved the way Julia and Kevin's relationship developed, and I'm especially glad you didn't go the cliche route with having their backstory revolve around a heartbreak like Mr. Dryer assumed. The two are so well matched for each other, and I was cheering along with the rest when they finally kissed. My only regret was that the story came to an end. Beautiful work.

:) this is rea;;y a heart warming story :)

waay to go ! :)

I LOVED IT! IT'S SO CUTE! :" I'd most definitely read this story if you ever decide to make into a novel! HAHAHA! I'd absolutely adore you if you ever make this story longer - you know, add chapters for the months they've worked together. It's only a suggestion! I just really loved this! The very fact that it's a oneshot is irking me. I. WANT. MORE. HAHAHA.

I seriously love the way you write. Your word usage is amazing - it's really colorful, and I could clearly picture every image, every movement, every setting. I was NEVER bored, and I read it steadily. It's amazing! I almost even cried (okay, just a bit) when Kevin and Jules fought... (well, not really, but you know what part I'm referring to!) And I felt the connection during the party! HAHAHA. I don't even know if you're ever going to read this, considering it's been such a long time since you first posted this (who knows, you might have abandoned your FP?), but I'd just like to say you have amazing talent, and I completely and inexpressibly loved this oneshot. I'd seriously push for you to make this into a novel, but I suppose I shouldn't count on it. Okay, I know I'm rambling, but I just seriously loved this. (Did I mention that? Hahaha~) Thank you for the amazing experience!

BTW, I feel like writing a novel to complain to FP since I, for some odd reason, cannot open ANYONE'S profile. Hence, I cannot view your other stories. Gr.

HAHAHA. I will most definitely go back to this! LOVE!

I am in love with your stories! I can read them over and over again. I really like the relationship between Kevin and Julia built up. It wasn't too fast or too slow. Amazing!

Homigosh, I loved it. I've always had a thing for Love/Hate stories. And this one is just perfect!

I particularly liked this line: "Personal bias. I'm way too infatuated. After this I'm going to think that everything you say is the greatest thing anyone has ever said." Cute.

Super Cute! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

I love Julia. And Kevin. I'm am Julia biased though. She just has qualtities I want to have when I grow up a little more. I want to be strong, independent, confident in what I do. Have her job. Because to be paided to read books sounds is my dream. Oh, and her sense of humor I relate to. I laughed a lot after read "After single-handedly bringing him to ruin in college, now it's my responsibility to see that he makes fame and fortune. FML." That sentence was funny and a great set up for everything to come. Genius hook.

Kevin is the guy that has the crush on the girl, so he reacts by pulling on her braids. Though in this case is irritate her and ruin her college social life. When he was being an arrognant dumbdumb, he actually reminded me a lot of Darcy. Espically when he suddenly turned all nice suddenly after he appologies. Darcy, but a more sacastric Darcy.

And Mr. Dryer is the sweetest boss. He's like a father to Jules. I want him as my boss.

Sometime I thought was werid about the story was how fast Kevin turned nice. I waas expecting him to be reluctantly appologizing. But to keep it a one-shot I guess I understand why the change is ubrupt.

Great story. Loved everyone. Get scenerio. Wished it was longer. Actually wish all your one-shots were extended stories. :D

love it~

it's beautiful, honest and sweet and emotionally disturbing. honestly. i was crying during Kevin's insensitive insults and Julia's hurt moments, then smiling and feeling mushy and amused the rest of the story. it's interesting and wonderfully done. definitely a good read and i can't help but love the characters and plot and everything else. good job! love it!

I absolutely lalalove this one shot. It's beyond amazing, the characters, the plot, just everything! Anyways, I hope you continue writing one shots and what not. ;D keke. that kinda rhymed.

This ending always makes me want to snuggle. Everytime I get impatient with your updates on PH (not complaining, promise) I head over to old school fictionpress to get the abbreviated love story. Love love love love love love this story, from top to bottom. Thanks for being alive.

And writing.

:)

I liked how this went against the cliché! Instead of having the guy dump the girl, it's the girl that ended up ruining the guy's life (and not romantically either!)

It was a great read! :)

This was a very, very, very good oneshot and i love that it's realistic and doesn't jump from one thing to another too quickly. It's a good plot line for a film :D

love this story