Reviews for She Walked Through the Shadows
Mirabella chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Oh no! The poor woman and man!

Beautifully written, the repetition worked well to add to the sadness. :)
Kuro Yuuki chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Good job. I really like the repetitive lines, and i especially liked the last stanza.
Sahara Mist chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
This was amazing. You can feel her sadness...and how she longs to be reunited with him. I long to write great poetry like you one day. Thanks for writing this!
howdylv08 chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Aww that almost made me cry! Good job with this! I really liked how you used the same lines in the same verse but in a different way. You executed this well. The last verse surprised me with the way the woman thought about the thunder. Very depressing, but uplifting in a way.


Sophie :3