Excellent! You have an outstanding ability to describe your characters!

Wow. Very emotional. It invoked so much emotion in me I almost started to cry. Recently, two of my friends passed away and one took himself, so this brought it all back in a new light. I'm grateful you helped me see their... passing in a different way. Thank you.

Good job with this one.

Sophie

this is deep. I love scenes like this, especially when the author does a superb job of reflecting the character's agony/emotions/feelings/etc, etc.

Great work!

Absolutely lovely.