GAHH! Bravo on your first m rated scene! Lol I really couldn't tell this was your first time writing one so woot go you! and finally an update! Gah the suspense!

I like that Belle isn't the stereotypical "save me pretty prince!" girl. She kicks ass and takes names!

i'm pretty sure i turned red reading that.

but yeah...ahahahahaha.

either way good chapter.

dude, it's a family of jerk faces.

seriously...

not even funny.

update soon!

Alphonso is horrible. D; That poor girl. lol.

& Ahaha, that fan story was funny. (:

Update soon!

-Kiara

Poor Belle :[

That must have been aw-kward..

Update soon, please? Your next chapter title awakened my curiosity

update son. i like this story. and alphonso is an asshole.

Yay, you updated! I keep trying to guess where this story is going but I can't...

I really hope she isn't going to be stuck with Alphonso forever!

Great chapter & I can't wait for more.

I love this story, it is sad because of what is happening but I love how she is a fighter, lol if she falls for Alf, he seems attractive enough just insane lol, it be a twist if she kills him anyway someday somehow haha but I love this story! ah update please soon haha

omg i love your writing! but you take forever and a day to update! but haha i completly uderstand since school does take up much of my day too..i hope you update soon D

I like this story, Alphonso a really angry person, I hope he's not like that for the rest of the story.

Oh. My. God.

Oh My God.

This story is very suspenseful.

I noticed that its in the Romance category. Who is she going to fall in love with?

I like how the story is progressing :]

please update soon

FUCK!NG HELL! he branded her! man, that's harsh.

i cant believe she tried to drown herself in the bath tub, these two are shocking me left and right.

i am dying to see what happens next.

great chapter

WOW!It's like I've been slapped in the face myself.

This story is awesome. It is really well written (besides the unavoidable mistake here and there, eg. in chapter four: "her knees were bend", should be "her knees were bent"). The first chapter did not at all prepare me for what was to happen next. It was really entertaining and different how you introduced her friends and the elaboration of these characters completely threw me when they cameoed (well so far) only very briefly in the beginning.

Lots of other kidnap and hostage stories on FictionPress tone down the violence. Though yours is very graphic, it's probably more realistic for the situation (except for the spanking, that seemed random to me). I really am enjoying it. The branding was very original untotally unexpected. So far this story is in no way cliched, except if she falls for captor and vice versa. But to tell the truth by what I've read so far I'm looking forward to that happening as I'm sure it will be written really originally and professionally, and not at all very cliched (no pressure! ;) ).

Will the significance of the name of the story make more sense as I read further into the story?

I absolutely can not wait until you update again. I really hope it's soon!

desmoulins.

i cant wait till nxt chapter

Interesting story I definitely enjoyed reading and Taken is one of my favorite movies!

The only thing that's weird is she acts so defiant and is then shocked when he treats her badly. And spitting is one thing but injuring a man's "manhood?" I'm surprised they haven't shot her no matter how...admirable or pretty she is.

Regardless I'm still very intrigued by the story and will continue to follow it. :)