Reviews for M'embrasser?
FlyingThroughDreams chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Haha! The beginning was hilarious!

But you didn't have to tell us that she was lying...that probably would have been better left alone, with just the "devious smile" bit. And we would have figured it out anyways. :D

Yeah, I can tell that this is some of your early works. I still enjoyed it, though! A happy read.

lovveee chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
whitecrayons chapter 1 . 10/11/2009

only the chinese phrase for 'i (am in) love (with) you' should be 我爱你, not 我恋爱了以你.

BornAverage chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
I'm kind of three months late, but I really

liked this. (:

Actually, I think the correct German translation

for that is: "Ich bin im liebe mit dir." because,

your translation, "Ich bin in der Liebe mit dir."

means, "I'm in the love with you."

Yeah, so I wanted to point that out...and if you wanted

to put the Filipino (Tagalog) translation, it's:

"Mahal kita." :D

But, I doubt you'd add it in, now that it's three

months late.
Chloeee chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Lol that one shot made me a little teary... It was great :) LOVED IT lol xD
x.betweenthelines chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
So cute!

I loved how he used all the languages when he confessed his love for her. I wonder how many guys do that in real life :p

Good job!
Whoaa Kayy chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
This is so cute! Omg, I love it!

-adds to favorites-

HopelesslyDevoted chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
"Ich bin in der Liebe mit dir" is the wrong translation for "I'm in love with you.

It's either "Ich liebe dich", which would be "I love you", or "Ich bin in dich verliebt" - "I'm in love with you".

Cute story with believable characters and a funny plot, but you should watch out for wrong translations.
lelz chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
that was so cute! i loved their firey relationship and using the french was awesome. props :D
meliese chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Yeah, I don't mean to be a language nazi or anything but I'm in love you in spanish can be "Estoy enamorado de ti", which is what I think you were trying to say.

But other than that, it's a very cute story ]
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
cute story:)
DramaticStarlet chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
This was good. Nice chemistry between the characters.

But may I ask...where did you get the translations from?
Atracha Gin chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
That was SO-OH cute. My Gosh. What one wouldn't do for this kind of love. M.

I know. I'm such a romantic. Hey! No Haters. Bet you're one too as is.
FlutePlayer15 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
AW! This was amazing! Extemely cute!
Scorpiongurl324 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Very cute! Loved it!

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