Aww cute! ]

By the way, french for I love you too is actually Je t'aime aussi.

Uhm, cute story I really liked it but I think a better translation for "I love you too" would be "Je t'aime aussi" or like "Je suis en amour avec vous aussi". Other than that the French translations were okay and the story was cute.

oh my gosh

SO ADORABLE

and since you made it so darn cute

i'm allowed to babble on about how cutesy and adorable it is

so it's your fault if you get annoyed with me saying the words 'cute' and 'adorable'

over and over and over

but in all honesty, it was too cute.

poor evelyn, she'll have to admit that rose is right

hahaha

loved the story )

good job D

izzie

aw, so cute. :) loved this story, especially all of the languages.

The french for "Kiss Me " is "embrasse moi"

I'M in love with you , means , I think in french " Je suis amoureux (ou amoureuse, for a girl) de toi "

Aw ... so cute... my fave part had to have been whe Jay went off in 6 differnt languages! Classic :)

In french reviews please Laissez des commentaires s'il vous plait.

hapiness bonheur

En français I love you Je t'aime

Spanish I love you Te quiero

Deutch I love you Ich liebe dich

this was great..i sent it to my friend, who loves french and languages in general lol, and he loved it too :P

bon effort!

Ahh, I kind of wish it had been drawn out further. But maybe it's better this way. Short and sweet.

I don't usually read romances, but this reminds me of how conflicting emotions can play out. Thanks for this.

You have a great hold on dialogue, I could definitely picture their personalities from what they said. Unlike a lot of stories around here where this kind of characterization is -entirely- backstory narrative, this is refreshing.

Good job!