Theres not much to say here but, Nice job! I really thought it was beautiful!

Wow, very beautiful. I haven't seen "Up", but i'm guessing there was some of the imagery came from? Still so stunning and heartwarming. I love when I feel this way, it's just such a wonderful way to run this race and you definitely captured that in this poem. Excellent job as always, Peace

timeless, miss. you've got it here.

(you've seen "up" yes?

the deliciously in love feeling i got when c. fred was going through the scrapbook was the same one i got reading this.)

you make me miss love.

This is a beautiful poem.

Does it have to end when the race is run, because I was planning for it to go on forever and ever.

~Yusuf