Reviews for sunshine
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
this was a really good poem, very diffrent.
Dr. Sweet chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
.BEAUTIFUL!

I cant even think of anything to say, its so wonderful. The word love comes to mind.
girl like cheshire chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
it left me smiling :)

love how you've captured that "god, i need to write" feeling time and time again with this. the marked changeover that was the third stanza, followed by the fantastic intensity of those next four lines was beautiful.