I have been searching 2 hours on the internet for a oneshot that would steal my breath away. Literally.
This is it. I loved loved loved it.

This is just so cute! I love it. You know, it's been plagiarized by ArShi90 on . Here's the link: /forum_ ?TID3090513. Here's a list of everything she's stolen: . .

So cute! :D

W.o.w
Thats all I can say.

Okay, so I didn't like how little character development it had. I didn't really feel like I knew either of the characters and therefore had no reason to want them to be together. I think it needed a little bit more backstory to really be effective.

However, I did like style, with the short pieces of story that told you pretty much everything you needed to know without getting too wordy. That was well done.

Overall I think it was more on the good side than the bad side. I appreciated the good grammar and lack of spelling errors.

Keep writing. )

would've been much better if this wasn't a oneshot, if you mentioned the characters' pasts, more quirks. but still, it's nice. i like how you made her proposal be like the guide in the moments she remembered why she loves him. :)

Amazing!

the guy made the girl realize how it felt to be in love.

this is so cute and sweet! I love it! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D such a cute new couple D

this is such A CUTE STORY

This was beautiful. :)

somuchformyhappyending

this is such a sweet one-shot _

Hi there I love your story pls. make more stories like this I just love romantic stories... Do you know Lady Kaldorei?

Cute.

This was so cute, but also it was very emotional. I loved seeing her realization. (: I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (: