Reviews for Collision
Mirabella chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
I like the use of alliteration, gets the message and flow accross well.

And the word use is great. :)
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
A richly worded poem - I liked the unusual combination of words which provide new perspectives to old things. But I think in poems like these where every word punches the reader in the face (in a good way of course xD) one expects little or no repetition, so it would probably be better if you changed the 2nd uses of 'bliss' and 'dream' and 'tormented' etc to something else so that the poem as a whole is even more refreshing. But don't get me wrong, it's a powerful poem already and I enjoyed it thoroughly )

~fleur