|Reviews for Columbine & the Lobster Dinner|
| Isca chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
"The lobster crawls back up my esophagus." I literally squirmed. That's how powerful and chilling the imagery in this line is. :D
| rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
It's very light but very serious.
Love what you did with the whole lobster, crawling back up.
The idea was very clever.
Lovely work. :)
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
jiminey, and of course that's
a good thing...crud, i wish
_i'd_ thought to use the
word 'esophagus' in a poem.
now it's too late, at least
for seven or eight months.