Reviews for the big earth teeth
qubed chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
The way you write gives me the idea that you've got a really good grasp on form, and composition, and you're just saying "fuck it", most of the time. Or maybe it's so ingrained and filtered through who you are that you are now just a well composed writer/dreamer.

Once again, you know how to pick out appropriate details.
smoke another grin chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
this is so long that I almost closed it, but then I began reading, and it's actually really good.

"if we die before you, we want you to know that we loved you.

we want you to think ridiculous things outside in the rain"

brilliant lines. the whole poem's so. young and reckless. well done.
This Modern Love chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
I normally don't have the patience to read poems this long. They usually piss me off somewhere in the first stanza. This is depressing, no doubt, but reeks so undeniably of the freedom of youth at the same time.