|Reviews for He Loves Her But He Has To Save Her First|
| Olyandther Rae Riley chapter 15 . 12/30/2010
WOW. this story is awesome..! okei keep writing!
| Olyandther Rae Riley chapter 9 . 12/30/2010
this part is so sweet! i like this kind of stories...hehe student-teacher kind of stuff. :D
| backtodecember chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Wow, a great first chapter. Who would have thought he'd see his student at a strip club, what's more being a stripper. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
| Unique1952 chapter 10 . 5/17/2010
| Unique1952 chapter 9 . 5/17/2010
Pretty good! I think it's written well my only concern is that their relationshop seems to be moving kinda fast.
Nice work with this chap though!
| Olyandther Rae Riley chapter 12 . 3/18/2010
Nice story! I love it. I'm expecting more chapters to come!
| sophiesix chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
ooh, great set up! Love how you describe that bar scene, it felt really real and, well awful, but well described and powerful. I now i really feel for Circe (great name by the way), because surely she would have recognised him, and now he's basically run from her - understandably so, but i hope she doesn't take it personally! For CC, really there's not much, but I guess it would be noce to have a bit more development of tehir relationship before teh bar scene, or even in teh park, have him flashback to a time in class or something, rather than just say they were close? That would make it even more powerful. And occasionally teh sentence structures get a bit repetitive, with for eg a lot of sentences starting with I? But thats pretty minor, because i enjoyed it heaps anyway :)
| Unique1952 chapter 8 . 9/7/2009
Sorry I haven't been reading lately, but school has had me occupied.
Nice work with this chapter and the last! The only thing that I see that may need adjusting is that unless I misunderstood something, at the beginning of this chapter, they were at a hotel then later on, you wrote he was leaving her apartment.
Other than that, great work with this! I liked how you ended this chapter too.
Again, good work and I look forward to reading more from you soon!
| DaFatGnome chapter 6 . 8/15/2009
I really like this story so far. I hope you update soon, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Unique1952 chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
Uh you hd a couple of areas with some puncuation missing like:
(“I cant trust that you wont do what you did again”)
Anyways, great work with this, I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter!
| hezsha2013 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
OMG! this story is amazing...
| Unique1952 chapter 4 . 7/6/2009
Wowsers, another great chapter.
We really to have similar writing styles! lol
I seriously ldislike Elish...just remember the name Monica in the future. hehe
I see you've been reading Charming, thanks!
Okay, I look forward to reading more of this story soon. Seriously, nice work with this. I really hope Circe moves back in!
| Unique1952 chapter 3 . 7/6/2009
And I thought I was Queen Cliffy! lol
...now I see whay people get so mad at cliffys, hmm, maybe I won't do it as much...
Nice work so far, again, I look forward to seeing what happens next!
| Elesian chapter 3 . 7/6/2009
no negative comments about this, only positive :)
great chapters & i've added this story to my favorites
| three.word.lies chapter 2 . 7/3/2009
this is very cute and i enjoy reading it (: can't wait for updates!