| Reviews for He Loves Her But He Has To Save Her First |
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   Olyandther Rae Riley chapter 15 . 12/30/2010 WOW. this story is awesome..! okei keep writing! |
| Olyandther Rae Riley chapter 9 . 12/30/2010 this part is so sweet! i like this kind of stories...hehe student-teacher kind of stuff. :D |
| backtodecember chapter 1 . 7/30/2010 Wow, a great first chapter. Who would have thought he'd see his student at a strip club, what's more being a stripper. I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| Unique1952 chapter 10 . 5/17/2010 Aww! Nice! |
| Unique1952 chapter 9 . 5/17/2010 Pretty good! I think it's written well my only concern is that their relationshop seems to be moving kinda fast. Nice work with this chap though! |
| Olyandther Rae Riley chapter 12 . 3/18/2010 Nice story! I love it. I'm expecting more chapters to come! |
| sophiesix chapter 1 . 2/25/2010 ooh, great set up! Love how you describe that bar scene, it felt really real and, well awful, but well described and powerful. I now i really feel for Circe (great name by the way), because surely she would have recognised him, and now he's basically run from her - understandably so, but i hope she doesn't take it personally! For CC, really there's not much, but I guess it would be noce to have a bit more development of tehir relationship before teh bar scene, or even in teh park, have him flashback to a time in class or something, rather than just say they were close? That would make it even more powerful. And occasionally teh sentence structures get a bit repetitive, with for eg a lot of sentences starting with I? But thats pretty minor, because i enjoyed it heaps anyway :) |
| Unique1952 chapter 8 . 9/7/2009 very nice! Sorry I haven't been reading lately, but school has had me occupied. Nice work with this chapter and the last! The only thing that I see that may need adjusting is that unless I misunderstood something, at the beginning of this chapter, they were at a hotel then later on, you wrote he was leaving her apartment. Other than that, great work with this! I liked how you ended this chapter too. Again, good work and I look forward to reading more from you soon! |
| DaFatGnome chapter 6 . 8/15/2009 I really like this story so far. I hope you update soon, and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Unique1952 chapter 6 . 7/30/2009 More please! Uh you hd a couple of areas with some puncuation missing like: (“I cant trust that you wont do what you did again”) Anyways, great work with this, I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter! |
| hezsha2013 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009 OMG! this story is amazing... please continue... |
| Unique1952 chapter 4 . 7/6/2009 Wowsers, another great chapter. We really to have similar writing styles! lol I seriously ldislike Elish...just remember the name Monica in the future. hehe I see you've been reading Charming, thanks! Okay, I look forward to reading more of this story soon. Seriously, nice work with this. I really hope Circe moves back in! |
| Unique1952 chapter 3 . 7/6/2009 Hey! And I thought I was Queen Cliffy! lol ...now I see whay people get so mad at cliffys, hmm, maybe I won't do it as much... Updat...please?...pretty please? lol Nice work so far, again, I look forward to seeing what happens next! |
| Elesian chapter 3 . 7/6/2009 no negative comments about this, only positive :) great chapters & i've added this story to my favorites |
| three.word.lies chapter 2 . 7/3/2009 this is very cute and i enjoy reading it (: can't wait for updates! |