Reviews for Waterfall
ChristianAngel01 chapter 6 . 7/4/2009
whoa This is a great story it was funny and you mentioned Jesus which was one of my favorite parts Good work :D
Mander Rose chapter 6 . 7/3/2009
Hehehe...I liked it ) I love westerns, lol.
goldenspork chapter 6 . 7/3/2009
nice. very cute. i would review more and longer, bu i have to go. :)
axiden chapter 6 . 7/3/2009
eventhough it' a cliche.. but a like it.
goldenspork chapter 5 . 7/2/2009
aw, jonas is so sweet!

and he better be okay. getting shot is totally uncool, just when he's about to kiss her. way uncool.
goldenspork chapter 3 . 7/2/2009
Dun dun dun...
goldenspork chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
You wrote 220 words as a light quick read? (*begins to laugh*) I like it so far, though. Jonas is kind of funny and D is intreguing.
toffeecakesxox chapter 6 . 7/2/2009
ah! character pictures!

ohemgee, i wanna see Jonas...

so adorable, and i loved it. :D

awesome quick read. :)
toffeecakesxox chapter 5 . 7/2/2009

intense! Jonas LOVE!

loved that ending... except the last few sentences. \

stupid Pure dude.

hate him!
toffeecakesxox chapter 4 . 7/2/2009
aw, cute last line!

now we know what happened- very suspenseful.

normally i wouldn't read Western, but i'll make an exception. :D
toffeecakesxox chapter 3 . 7/2/2009
ah! cliffhanger much? :P

but i'm halfway through...

and wow, i'm falling in love with Jonas and Delilah. :)
toffeecakesxox chapter 2 . 7/2/2009
aw, i love Jonas. and his... personality.


and i love how Delilah can stand up to him.

very believable. :)
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
oh, i love their relationship so far!

can't wait to finish.

and! i wonder what this secret of Delilah's is. :)
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