Reviews for Butcher
BlackArtist chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Gah, stupid computer. I meant to say that I saw Kai maybe sodomizing the man, or other humiliations. I have to wonder what that makes me as I kinda laughed as his whores died. Oh well. Nice work.
BlackArtist chapter 5 . 8/7/2011
This kind of stuff isn't really my norm and I'm not hyprocritical enough to call you a sick fuck because your character is but still... out there. You've got a nice writing style and are very good with the details although after the first few chapters it became a bit monotonous. Inasmuch as sadistic torture can be of course. It was a good move changing it up a little with the threesome and his past, though you may have killed off the male a little too quickly. I kinda saw Kai being one to keep the man alive too, since he lWhere did you even get the idea for this? And wtf does it say about m
alexandra101 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
AweSOMe!
Tiny Mudkip chapter 5 . 10/23/2010
I absolutely adore this story, I hope chapter 6 comes out soon.
Domestic bliss chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
Story is interesting, but why does Mandy have to be one dimensional? It would be interesting to get more out of his victims. The way they're written, it's like even the writer thinks that they have Kai's torture coming to them just for being such dumb sluts. Also, the situation reminds me of a famous murderer and his buddies. I can only remember his partner's name for some reason though...Cindy Hendy, I think. Kept their victims in a "Toybox" they built in their basement.
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 5 . 7/4/2010
Aw... I wanted to see

him die. Oh well. XD

Good story, although

not a fan of sex scenes...

Why the hell did I read

this again? XD
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
I wonder what would happen

if he were to get caught?

Well, one more chapter.

Let's see what happens...
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
What a sick fuck Kai

is. I feel bad for

those girls. At the

same time, I laugh

at the whores that

they are.
Dalek17 chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
This stuff makes for a great horror story, but jeez, it scared me. Kind of makes you think about people, huh? Keep going.
anonomous chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
you are a sick and messed up person to be writing something this.
silent-anthem chapter 2 . 5/6/2010
wow, this is more twisted and messed than the first one. See nothing wrong and I like how you go in depth with your descriptions making the story more twisted and a true psychological horror.

silent-anthem
Tigress Noel chapter 5 . 5/4/2010
I'm a sick fuck for like this, but what can i say i like what i like. Keep on writing. Kai amuses and interests the fuck out of me.
silent-anthem chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
okay...first things first. AMAZING! very very descriptive, nothing wrong with the grammer and a very deep and telling story (yes I know I only read the 1st chapter but really...)

Really good story.

silent-anthem
cherryflakes chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
you just made me think twice'bout letting guys but me drinks lol

pretty good
RokitToMars chapter 5 . 4/23/2010
O, I really love the ending!

Very foreshadowing :)

Wow, should not be using smileys with this story should I...

Uh, where, oh right!

I really like the stuff about his past you're putting in, kinda like a before the monster thing.

But yeah, good stuff.
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