Reviews for Butcher
Guest chapter 5 . 1/28
Shame I am not the type of girl Kai would kill. Means proper whore with clothes and behaviour. I know that all women are whores but still he seems to have a model. Otherwise sounds fun. What he does is something I want done to me pretty much. To feel what is so many things being cut or ripped. Your throat being cut open. He needs real masochist. He is fictional.
Little bit annoing with this saw, there are and other good to cut with leapons like satir, I am not sure about the name on english, but hope you get it. Choping a body with this one would be more fun that with saw. Or electric knife, for small parts, but still the saw wasn't bad at all.
Probably I am the only one that founds him as someone they want to meet, but...
Also he reminds me of another character, but he is from manga. Also kills girls in his basement, break their legs, beat them, rips them appart, masturbate and kills them. But he is fucked up by his parrents in young age. Still cool guy, I don't want them to kill him, but probably that will happen. As for this I think that no matter how many people want and ask this is the end of the story. He kills her and moves on without being captured or killed or anything like that. which is a smart end. good job
Guest chapter 5 . 3/11/2017
Great story, the only thing I would like to see though, is some kind of female partner for Kai to share his endeavors with and to help him satisfy his urges both violent and sexual on others.
A fan chapter 5 . 3/7/2017
In keeping with the theme of this story:

"Please, just update! I'll do anything, I'll keep quiet, I won't tell anyone just please, fucking update!"
Pandora10001 chapter 3 . 12/19/2016
I love it
susan karlson chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
Your killer is merciless and exquisitely brutal, but seemed to be lacking in ingenuity. With a beautiful girl at his mercy, could he not have savoured her pain and terror by using more delicate forms of torture to convince her to accept his mastery ?
One could spend hours with a cigarette or a soldering iron causing dreadful agony yet leaving ones victim healthy enough to endure days of increasing violence before the delights of slicing off pendant beaten breasts or rupturing swollen branded wombs cause the final screams of agony.
But I love the lack of deception. This is a snuff story with no restraint, and for that I am thankful.
susan chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
shame he is not a she, but for a guy he's pretty goog...
susan chapter 5 . 2/11/2016
Oh, that was a surprise. I was hoping he would find she liked what he did, they would dispose of her boyfriend very painfully, then she would avidly learn how to mutilate girls and sever thei breasts in his play room.
Jan chapter 5 . 11/2/2014
Gripping :)
BlackArtist chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Gah, stupid computer. I meant to say that I saw Kai maybe sodomizing the man, or other humiliations. I have to wonder what that makes me as I kinda laughed as his whores died. Oh well. Nice work.
BlackArtist chapter 5 . 8/7/2011
This kind of stuff isn't really my norm and I'm not hyprocritical enough to call you a sick fuck because your character is but still... out there. You've got a nice writing style and are very~ good with the details although after the first few chapters it became a bit monotonous. Inasmuch as sadistic torture can be of course. It was a good move changing it up a little with the threesome and his past, though you may have killed off the male a little too quickly. I kinda saw Kai being one to keep the man alive too, since he lWhere did you even get the idea for this? And wtf does it say about m
alexandra101 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Tiny Mudkip chapter 5 . 10/23/2010
I absolutely adore this story, I hope chapter 6 comes out soon.
Domestic bliss chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
Story is interesting, but why does Mandy have to be one dimensional? It would be interesting to get more out of his victims. The way they're written, it's like even the writer thinks that they have Kai's torture coming to them just for being such dumb sluts. Also, the situation reminds me of a famous murderer and his buddies. I can only remember his partner's name for some reason though...Cindy Hendy, I think. Kept their victims in a "Toybox" they built in their basement.
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 5 . 7/4/2010
Aw... I wanted to see

him die. Oh well. XD

Good story, although

not a fan of sex scenes...

Why the hell did I read

this again? XD
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
I wonder what would happen

if he were to get caught?

Well, one more chapter.

Let's see what happens...
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