Reviews for Butcher
susan karlson chapter 5 . 8/1
Your killer is merciless and exquisitely brutal, but seemed to be lacking in ingenuity. With a beautiful girl at his mercy, could he not have savoured her pain and terror by using more delicate forms of torture to convince her to accept his mastery ?
One could spend hours with a cigarette or a soldering iron causing dreadful agony yet leaving ones victim healthy enough to endure days of increasing violence before the delights of slicing off pendant beaten breasts or rupturing swollen branded wombs cause the final screams of agony.
But I love the lack of deception. This is a snuff story with no restraint, and for that I am thankful.
susan chapter 1 . 8/1
shame he is not a she, but for a guy he's pretty goog...
susan chapter 5 . 2/11
Oh, that was a surprise. I was hoping he would find she liked what he did, they would dispose of her boyfriend very painfully, then she would avidly learn how to mutilate girls and sever thei breasts in his play room.
Jan chapter 5 . 11/2/2014
Gripping :)
BlackArtist chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Gah, stupid computer. I meant to say that I saw Kai maybe sodomizing the man, or other humiliations. I have to wonder what that makes me as I kinda laughed as his whores died. Oh well. Nice work.
BlackArtist chapter 5 . 8/7/2011
This kind of stuff isn't really my norm and I'm not hyprocritical enough to call you a sick fuck because your character is but still... out there. You've got a nice writing style and are very~ good with the details although after the first few chapters it became a bit monotonous. Inasmuch as sadistic torture can be of course. It was a good move changing it up a little with the threesome and his past, though you may have killed off the male a little too quickly. I kinda saw Kai being one to keep the man alive too, since he lWhere did you even get the idea for this? And wtf does it say about m
alexandra101 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
AweSOMe!
Tiny Mudkip chapter 5 . 10/23/2010
I absolutely adore this story, I hope chapter 6 comes out soon.
Domestic bliss chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
Story is interesting, but why does Mandy have to be one dimensional? It would be interesting to get more out of his victims. The way they're written, it's like even the writer thinks that they have Kai's torture coming to them just for being such dumb sluts. Also, the situation reminds me of a famous murderer and his buddies. I can only remember his partner's name for some reason though...Cindy Hendy, I think. Kept their victims in a "Toybox" they built in their basement.
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 5 . 7/4/2010
Aw... I wanted to see

him die. Oh well. XD

Good story, although

not a fan of sex scenes...

Why the hell did I read

this again? XD
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
I wonder what would happen

if he were to get caught?

Well, one more chapter.

Let's see what happens...
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
What a sick fuck Kai

is. I feel bad for

those girls. At the

same time, I laugh

at the whores that

they are.
Dalek17 chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
This stuff makes for a great horror story, but jeez, it scared me. Kind of makes you think about people, huh? Keep going.
anonomous chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
you are a sick and messed up person to be writing something this.
silent-anthem chapter 2 . 5/6/2010
wow, this is more twisted and messed than the first one. See nothing wrong and I like how you go in depth with your descriptions making the story more twisted and a true psychological horror.

silent-anthem
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