Reviews for Darkened Road
Kinna chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
This is a very comforting poem.

FI was only slightly confused at this part, "With nothing to comfort" because it makes more sense to have the word 'me' on the end, unless the speaker wants to comfort someone else.

My favourite lines and images are also same as GirlWithTheBrokenSmile. It was an illuminating thought and image, pun intended. _
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
I had a dream similar to this a while back, only there was no light:(

Loved the lines:

"The yellow flood of light

Shows that the ground is rocky

Only where my feet think

They need to go

But they don't"

Beautifully done!