|Reviews for Asylum|
| ArsenicHalo chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
I like it; it's creepy, cool and sweet. Usually, I'm not much of a poetry fan but I think you have serious talent. Beautiful imagery!
| Louis Denair chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Rather a vibrant description. Very emotional and the ending is suprising, taking you off-guard and rather somber and melancholy, which makes it a fine, fine mood piece.
| Isca chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
"All in her mind." Wow. I love the idea that 'breezes' and other such elements are able to penetrate our minds. That's quite profound.
"The graceful bow of his lips." Excellent description. The word 'graceful' makes this male character appear so suave.
Wow. The ending is phenomenal (albeit horrific in a good way). The 'dancing' imagery is both beautiful and chilling. I'm glad that doctors don't use EST much these days.
Keep up the fabulous work. :)
| TaschaBear chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
WOW, this was very powerful.
An unusual but stunning topic.
This piece would be wonderful to continue in a way where you see the different point of views all the usual cases in an asylum.
| girl like cheshire chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
god. this seems so damn profound and i can't put my finger on a single phrase to tell you where it switched from good to brilliant.
"the electroshock screams"