Reviews for VixTails : Prince Nyne
Yezalb chapter 8 . 8/15/2009
Great work!

Keep it up.
deletety chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
So, is the whole story going to be about cats? Haha, yeah i assume it will be, but I might be wrong. It seems really interesting at the moment.

In your prologue, your imagery is amazing. I love your first few lines, they took me straight into your story.

And the humour was pretty good too, and how it's all cat related. Good job.
Jack chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
I enjoyed this prologue as it has ended on a real cliff hanger. This really makes the reader want to read on to find out what has happened to the brother. I can't really think of any improvements apart from 1 spelling mistake, all in all very good!
xenolith chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
I don't really get into these kind of stories, and I'm surprised by your profile that you would read mine! That said, I thought this was pretty good. I got a little confused as to who was the he and who was the she, but I thought the ending and how you worded it was really very interesting, especially for a prologue, and for someone who hasn't read anything remotely similar.