Aw, this was the cutest thing I ever read! I love it :D

Haha. This oneshot is really nice and I love both Jerry and Lex. I'll be checking your profile to see if you made another story with them (or at least, any other story you've written ) and you know what would be cool? If you made a story about how they got together. :D

Ahahahaha so random:) describing someone as a rhino lol

Aw, this was awesome! I loved the summary, it just drew me in. Anyway, this was great. Keep up the lovely work!

wow dis is just sooooooooooooooooo perefecttttttttt :) love it

Adorable. Just really adorable and entertaining to read. Lex has such a great voice, she oozes sarcasm and wit, making an extremely entertaining read. I laughed out loud several times. Both of their speeches were squeal worthy (and Jerry's was hilarious...talk about getting nervous haha).

So cute hehe

Okay. That was SO BRILLIANT.

And now I'm going to sleep cause I'm pooped.

But thankyou for the wonderful bedtime story :)

Wow. I honestly love this story. It was hilarious :D

Your writing style is awesome and it made me laugh so many times. I also loved your characters :D

Well, there isn't a single bad thing to say about this story :)

Keep writing :)

This is deeeeeeefinitely gettin' faved. D

cutest thing eva! sniffles

This was SO cute! Even though this is a one-shot it NEEDS to be published cuz its one of those stories for all types of generations to read and go 'aww!'

I seriously couldn't stop laughing at all the situations she came up with, where Jerry was humiliating her LMAO. Is he really THAT much of a prankster that he could come up with all those idea's *gaping*. WOW i wish i knew a Jerry, how awesome would it be to have someone like him in ones life, but alas i'm stuck with people like Tristan LOL, just kidding their not THAT bad LOL.

Anyways, this was one hilarious story. I understood her annoyance at him, sometimes it could get frustrating when all someone does is goof around and never has a moment of seriousness, but damn is she an idiot even a person with one brain cell could have realised that Jerry seriously loved her alot. As a matter of fact that is probably the only serious thing he does in his life LMAO. *sigh* what a lucky girl.

Great story!

P.S .. PAHAHAHAHA ... Ben and Jerry. Now that's probably a fated friendship.

that was cute, light, funny and sweet... love it~

nice work!

If you receive two reviews for this then I apologise. I think I may have already reviewed it, but my computer crashed after hitting the submit review button.

So I will try to remember what I wrote the first time!

I like this story. Your writing style is refreshing and fun, and your ability to get into peoples heads and show their natural insecurities as opposed to trying to make your characters all seem perfect is something that I really enjoy.

Yes, it may be a little bit slap-stick in places, but that's what makes it so much fun to read. In my opinion anyway!

Spawny