|Reviews for Slut|
| Subbie chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Yes... know exactly what you mean.
| Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
I feel a bit sorry for the speaker in this. Well done with this poem, it's quite emotive and flows pretty well.
| Lucy chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Not bad, in the last line instead of "wondering why I do this to myself." I think Wondering Why, would fit better.
| growing-up chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Been there. Done that.
i totally sympathise.
You're writing my story i think love.
| Devon Pitlor chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Poetry...how bad I am at understanding it! But I liked the terseness of this and the occasional rhyme. The scene is all too familiar also, either for a woman or a man. It doesn't matter. If I wrote poetry, which I don't, it would be quick and punchy like this with short lines and piercing images. I think you have talent, even though I am not the best audience for poetry or any kind of verse.
| High Anxiety chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
a slut because the world says you are.
a slut because you say you are.
this is great. i just hope its not 100% true /
| jbfbam chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
holy crap you have a gift and if this is how you truly feel then i apologize for everyone. such an obviously amazing person should not feel so terrible
| words.for.you-DLS chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
I like this. I can picture it all and it seems very deep to me. Nice job.
| xenolith chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Yeah, really good. Depressing and bleak, but good. I don't know a damn thing about poetry but I liked somewhere in the middle how it was unrhythmic? and then with the line 'sneak out with the morning light' you put it back into place, it was really satisfying.
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This is really good.
The reader can really feel the emotion
and frustration in this piece showing
the what you put into this.
Again, nice work with this piece.