Reviews for Breaking Point
Guest chapter 40 . 12/7/2017
I'm not going to lie, I've read this story to the point I've got it memorized. It's a fantastic story! I don't know how else to express how much I enjoy this story,but I really really do.
Is there a sequel in the makings? I would love to see the shenanigans that would ensue. Thanks so much for sharing this story for all of us to read! -Oldfaithful
TMSantos chapter 1 . 11/19/2015
I commented at the end of this story 3 Love it so much! I reaaaally wish Donavan and Marcy would be together in the other story. Hehe. I just don't see her with the prince, but she's got quite the connection with him here.
T. M. Santos chapter 40 . 11/17/2015
MonicaAlveen chapter 40 . 7/8/2013
Loved it!
R. Ficst chapter 41 . 11/10/2012
Nice work. I'm glad to hear you're working on revisions. There's the obvious bit about her backstory that doesn't match with the beginning, and then several typos and misspellings that should hopefully be caught with proofreading. Overall though, you've achieved something incredible and produced a worthwhile piece of work.

Much enjoyed :)

(Especially enjoyed the scenes where she is proving herself, and the way she remembers to SING) XD
Anonymous chapter 21 . 5/8/2012
Okay, first I need to tell you how amazing this is so far. I seriously think that you should publish this thing, at least as an ebook! I would definitely buy it. It is professionally written. The only thing I thought could be worked on is the relationship between Laurie and Marcy. I absolutely love that they are drifting and she is getting closer to Donovan, because that's actually what I was rooting for in the beginning. But, I would have liked it if you had included a few more scenes with Laurie and Marcy, to show exactly why she had once fallen for him. The way it is now, I didn't really ever understand how she fell for him, and then it seemed like her grief over his deception was a little too intense for the relationship that had been there. It's not major, and doesn't detract from how much I absolutely LOVE this, but I thought that I would review to give you my thoughts on this point :)
alexisrenee chapter 41 . 2/24/2012

Although if anyone can, you can.


It is amazing! I didn't particularly notice many inconsistencies (and for me that's saying something since nothing bothers me more than inconsistency).
alexisrenee chapter 40 . 2/15/2012
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! This is so absolutely freakin' adorable! Gah, I absolutely LOVE Marcy! I normally dislike that name, but it suits her well!


Such a great story! Oh, also, Donny is one of the coolest guy-elves EVER!
mexy chapter 34 . 2/13/2012
We have expected this thing about Cornelius but now that it is coming it is just puts me in much antcipation. To say I have enjoyed reading your stiry is an understatement. You're good. :) I'll give you a better review when I finish reading.
A Reader chapter 40 . 2/12/2012
I liked it, but there were a lot of continuity errors (hair color, back-story, etc) that took away from the reading experience. I would suggest editing the earlier chapters so they match the later ones (or vice versa).
Lorana chapter 40 . 2/9/2012
All I can say about the end... aaaaaaaaawwwwww. Was a bit shorter than I hoped, but I do wonder if you are planning on a sequel.
Brian chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This is for a different chapter (not sure what one) but did my Grandmother read this story? She has told of the "The place beyond the mists." :) ANd update already please?
D-Mish chapter 34 . 1/29/2012
Totally loving this story though you have some inconsistencies - such as where Marcy came from, origianally you said that she just lived with the crazy lady (I forget the name) but now she's been through various different homes? And also I swear when Marcy was remember her past with Laurie, she thought her name was Annabelle not Kaelyn. Nevertheless I love your writing and wish for consistent updates, just some things are confusing so if you ever read over this story you'll fix that up :)
BerriBobbaT chapter 35 . 1/22/2012
WHAT? OMG I bet he poisned the king himself!

...Ok sorry, I had to freak out a little. And I am confused, Is Donovan and Marcy really married or is it just fake? And if it is real i cant wait to see what Laurie does.

Please update soon!
BerriBobbaT chapter 34 . 1/3/2012
I would have reviewed all of the other chaps, but I didnt have an account I absolutely love your stories, and I have an idea, What if Donovan had a secret admirer(sp?) / stalker, and she or he becomes dangerous, once they find out about thier marriage? Its just an idea, but I love your stories, and you have to continue this one , because if you dont, I will die (not really I just would be EXTREMELY bored. XD )
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