Reviews for Breaking Point
Mo- The Reviewer chapter 9 . 10/31/2009
WHOOP WHOOP!

GO MARCY!

~Mo~
lostlette chapter 8 . 10/28/2009
AW
Mo- The Reviewer chapter 8 . 10/27/2009
Aw! Laurie practically (in a way) admitted that he liked her (or possibly loved her )... That is so cute!

PLEASE UPDATE [A][S][A][P][!][!]

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer chapter 7 . 10/14/2009
AMAZING story! SIMPLY AH-MAY-ZING!

~Mo~
lostlette chapter 7 . 10/10/2009
its good.
lostlette chapter 6 . 9/27/2009
AW. I LOVE IT!
lostlette chapter 5 . 9/7/2009
I love this story! I wish there was more to read.
lostlette chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
urgh! those huys are butt heads! especially Laurie!
lostlette chapter 3 . 7/8/2009
I love this story. I wish you could update more frequently but I know how life gets.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
I felt like this did a good job introducing us to Marcy and Nancy. The only suggestion I really have for this chapter is to try combining paragraphs. You've got a lot of really short, choppy paragraphs, and by combining the ones that can be combined, it should be a lot smoother to read.

Good luck with your project!

-Steph
lostlette chapter 2 . 7/6/2009
I like this story.
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