| Reviews for Breaking Point |
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   Mo- The Reviewer chapter 9 . 10/31/2009 WHOOP WHOOP! GO MARCY! ~Mo~ |
| lostlette chapter 8 . 10/28/2009 AW |
| Mo- The Reviewer chapter 8 . 10/27/2009 Aw! Laurie practically (in a way) admitted that he liked her (or possibly loved her )... That is so cute! PLEASE UPDATE [A][S][A][P][!][!] ~Mo~ |
| Mo- The Reviewer chapter 7 . 10/14/2009 AMAZING story! SIMPLY AH-MAY-ZING! ~Mo~ |
| lostlette chapter 7 . 10/10/2009 its good. |
| lostlette chapter 6 . 9/27/2009 AW. I LOVE IT! |
| lostlette chapter 5 . 9/7/2009 I love this story! I wish there was more to read. |
| lostlette chapter 4 . 8/12/2009 urgh! those huys are butt heads! especially Laurie! |
| lostlette chapter 3 . 7/8/2009 I love this story. I wish you could update more frequently but I know how life gets. |
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 I felt like this did a good job introducing us to Marcy and Nancy. The only suggestion I really have for this chapter is to try combining paragraphs. You've got a lot of really short, choppy paragraphs, and by combining the ones that can be combined, it should be a lot smoother to read. Good luck with your project! -Steph |
| lostlette chapter 2 . 7/6/2009 I like this story. |