Reviews for Goldilocks And The Three Bears The True Story
Hiba chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
This is awesome! So clever... :)
julia thuer chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
this is a great story I laughed so hard
Del'kiyaRa'shaye chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
De'nya La'shaye
Davii chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I Luvv Itt
ata chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
u didnt6 really persuade me
TymCon chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Nice story. I bit dull though if you heard goldilocks and the three bears before though. I like the last line of this though. Youre last lines are always good btw.
RainbowNightmares chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Varelie chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Interesting take on the story BUT I still side with the bears lol
Chagrin Oak chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Haha! Goldilocks is so funny! It's true anyway, they should stop putting and writing and telling one-sided fairy tales! Poor antagonists.
jake Chan chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
This is funny! It sort of shows Goldilocks' character, and how she didn't just barge in and take over. (BTW, in the little book that I use to read, the Bears actually invite Goldilocks to lunch, but that's not the traditional version)

There's some spelling, like- "luckily the last chair didn't brake" it should be "break", and "Getting up I tried apologising" should be "apologizing" but overall, it's a funny read.

Thanks for reviewing my story, High School Bleachers! I really appreciate it! :D
Grasspaw chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
lol. love it
Amaury chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Ha. Cute. Poor Goldilocks.