|Reviews for Freudian Forgetfulness|
| lookingwest chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I like your title for this poem because it immediately put me on the look out for the subconscious at work here, and that sense of the "Other" that I think you conveyed well when you went into the morbid third stanza. This also hearkens away from your usual critique of society and more so on the actual individual, which I also liked. The sense of dizziness kind of comes over with the first stanza too, which I think carries through for me until the end when the speaker finally makes sense of everything and kind of just realizes what must be done-it's a very obvious resolute, or revelation.
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| Howle chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Wonderful as always.
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Very nice, I like the emotion present here as well as your choice in words.
Again, nice work here.