Reviews for Song
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
This is really amazing. One of the best pieces I've read recently because you image is just so beautifully described. I love how it's a happy piece also, most of them on fp are prosey or boring, but this was just beautiful. I also love the ending, it's so sweet and uplifting. Great job.

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ArekuKawaii chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
I didn't like the commas in this peice, they seemed to interupt the flow for me. I think if you left a few out that might work beter.

I liked that you put music in this peice because that made me think of music and it was a nice part of this poem.
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
"A note, maybe, double, to echo my heartbeat."

That was a freaking awesome line! It painted such cool imagery. I especially like how youve ended it :)