Reviews for departure
Isca chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I liked that you connected the 'pain of missing' someone to a 'sinking feeling' in one's chest-you mixed emotion and sensory perception well here.
Dr. Sweet chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
... im speechless.

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Amaury chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Very good.