Reviews for The Great Pretender
Bratsie chapter 15 . 10/8/2009
-snorts- I love the way Ari pulled on Liam's and Belle's ears. Hilarious because I would actually do that to someone. Aw, seeing as Belle was engrosed with Ari's retelling of the proposal, seems as if our leading lady is a romatic at heart. I love it. :] Can't wait for the new chapter Claves!

Love you always, Bratsie
a little girl chapter 15 . 10/8/2009
aw pls update! it was so short i wanna read more ;)
fuwafuwafuwari chapter 15 . 10/8/2009
Thank you! This has been such a good read so far!
theloverslife chapter 15 . 10/7/2009
Not gonna lie, I was a little disappointed by the length, and I really wish you packed more into it. :'(

Either way, it rocked! So keep up the good work and update soon!

Hugs and kisses,

Coffee (:
Alenor chapter 15 . 10/7/2009
oh an engagement! very nice. i can't wait for more, they have to talk to each other some time! ~ Alenor
bananamilkshake chapter 15 . 10/7/2009
ah... so they're still mad at each other. while I think Liam's making a big fuss out of this, he's not necessarily wrong. How could Belle have written something so personal, even if it did have a catharthic effect for her... Doesn't Belle know that the more she pushes him away, in a sense, she's also denying him the only family he has now? Belle needs to think more about his feelings... I think she's being a little too self-centred sometimes.
chng234 chapter 15 . 10/7/2009
i m happy that tony n ariel r getting married. i hope things between liam n belle will improved soon.
noriepie chapter 15 . 10/7/2009
please please let it be the part of him where he carries her off just to be with her win! lol


that's a typo in the beginning

i have a feeling something will blow up before it will blow over.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 15 . 10/7/2009
loved it!

please update soon!
Triple Vice chapter 5 . 10/7/2009
I hate that life gets in the way. Will have to finish this story later, but you are rediculously talented. A couple of grammatical errors and such here and there, but the content is first class. You are going places, hon. Can't wait to read the rest, and will definitely give a better review next chance I get.
Venomous Vengeance chapter 14 . 10/4/2009
LOVELY! it's just lovely. but you know what would make the stor awesomer? is that if you let liam and ariel find out about it whne they were filming and had to meet the author. and then you could make belle try to ind a way to not meet thema and then they would and the big blow up would happen. but that's just my opinion. anyways can't wait for the next chapter!
OoohLookACat chapter 14 . 10/2/2009
hmm, Ariel doesn't seem AS surprised as i thought she'd be about 'the big reveal'

Belle & Ari's dad seems like a jerk

how mean can you be to your kids? geez

hopefully that convo with Ari makes things easier to understand for Liam :)


can't wait for the next chapter )

Anu chapter 14 . 9/30/2009
Aww happy ending for (almost) everyone! I'm guessing there's gonna be a big heart to heart next and a LOT of making up afterwards hehe :)

Loving it as always!

toazdo chapter 14 . 9/29/2009
aww.. love ariel and tony D
holdyourbreath chapter 14 . 9/29/2009
aww, YAY! They're so cute and perfect for each other, I love it! Now Liam and Belle need to work out their issues and be happy in love too haha
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