Hello? Um.. what's the name of your new account? (am I doing this right?) I would love to read your oneshot! Why is it removed?

I would love to read your stories.

yay Amie found someone else to love too :D

it would suck if theyre friendship was broken b/c of Adrian :P

i feel like i'm missing something in here. i mean, when and how did they date or something? it's missing the middle. i only see the beginning and ending of the story. it's quite good actually but it would be better if we see the complete story between those two.

am i mean in this review? if i am, i'm realy sowy...

but still, it's just a one-shot and it's kinda good too :)

Seriously, this is just like my life but we are younger and it happen in about a month. sigh...never mind i love it. i would go and read more of your stuff but i need to make some more cookies! i read some tomorrow okay :D i told you i would review,...haha i'm not really reviewing haha. any who i love it. it is really sweet, i got a little confused but that is good, i like getting confused when it is out like that. i love it to freaking pieces and i will read it again and again...well when i get bored :D

cookies!

I feel like I missed out on half of the story. All we see is the beginning and the end, but there's no middle. We know the two characters hate each other but we don't really know why. The story just says the Adrian used to bully Piper's friend but nothing else. And we never see what makes Amie or Piper believe that Adrian is a good guy. We don't even get to see Amie's reaction when Adrian tells her he loves Piper. Nor do we find out why Adrian dislikes Piper, except for the fact that she doesn't like him, and we don't really know what makes him like her. I liked this story, but I was disappointed because I felt like most of the things I wanted to know were left out.

Oh that was so good! Amie must have been really forgiving after that day in the park...but I'm glad it all turned out okay. Again, that was really good! D ~Angela

Really cute!

Oh, and there's a little spelling error:

'Throwing a few ten pound bills which, I knew, made up a some that was way too high to have driven me from town to my house, I ran into the house.' It should be 'made up a sum'

Aw, that was such a sweet story! I love the way that you laid it out w/ the flashforward (or whatever the heck it's called! lol :D) and then the rest of the story! I hope you win! :] :]

I liked this one as well :)

You can find it in my c2 for voting. Good Luck!

~Annoyance

this was amazingly cute!

That's cute. I love, well, love stories. Well written and nice work.