Reviews for When I Think About it
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
i like this format for you. actually, i like this format and i plan to steal it from you sometime down the road. (sorry about that) It's my evil plan. I actually love this poem. It reminded me of a hakiu (i hate hakiu bc you have to have the 5-3-5 or whatever) This got your point straight across like a hakiu without the 5-3-5. (does that make sense?)
Glass Queen chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
i like poems like this, in this format at least. However, i think this poem lacks depth...i'm not saying that it was intended to have depth, but i've been reading a lot of your stuff, and i know what you're capable of. So yeah, keep it up :)

-Kaitrin
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
:( Wow really sad and pessimistic. Do try to be positive and keep writing.

Anna _