Reviews for Little Mysteries
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
This was very unique and interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Great word choice and wonderful imagery. The lines particularity that I liked were, "frail spider legs camouflaged in mascara" and "and nightmares of windows where I shut the blinds" Great job, well written!
K.G. Coleman chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Very nice. Trippy. You should consider putting some punctuation in though. I mean, technically when reading a poem you're just supposed to buzz right on through until there's a comma or period. I don't think that's what you're looking for in your poem. Good though. Intriguing.
Amaury chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Wow. This was very good.

"what are you hiding?"

great word use.