Reviews for Little Mysteries |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was very unique and interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Great word choice and wonderful imagery. The lines particularity that I liked were, "frail spider legs camouflaged in mascara" and "and nightmares of windows where I shut the blinds" Great job, well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Trippy. You should consider putting some punctuation in though. I mean, technically when reading a poem you're just supposed to buzz right on through until there's a comma or period. I don't think that's what you're looking for in your poem. Good though. Intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This was very good. "what are you hiding?" great word use. |