Loved this story! Always enjoy your writing style :)

Awwww Love it reading...

Awh this was brilliant! Joseph is such a cutie ehehe

A fun twist to the story; a twist which had the potential to go terribly wrong. Thanks for sharing your talent.

lovelovelove

haha, hilarious! i did kinda wanna slap the others though but thats probably because i hate people lying to me... aside from the violent thoughts i had, i really enjoyed this, nina didnt make me wanna vomit and joseph was adorable. i think my favorite character though, would have to be neil. he. is. awesome. have ya thought of doing a one-shot 4 him? maybe? possibly? heck to the no? D. great one-shot)

Aaaaww! I wish I had a Joseph... Anyway, I love it! So cute!

"She's crazy. I think she glared at a baby." That line was hilarious. It had me laughing for a full five minutes. Good Story.

can i be honest? :D i noticed neil more than joseph -"

Loved it!

JM

That was super long because you kept going off on tangents... was a lot of that stuff really necessary? You didn't do the whole foreshadowing thing very well either... You have good grammar though. But your voice and language needs work, it just sounded so long and run on, I actually didn't manage to finish it.

Okay I do think this dragged on a bit. There was definitely some unnecessary details, and though I do like developed oneshots, I think this one crossed the limit a little. I also think this was incredibly cliche and the writing could have been more polished.

But this was really cute, and I'm glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2.

so cute and funny! good job! )

Well thought out and well developed. I liked it a lot. It sure made up for not having a Seven Alphas chapter.

Sian x

Ah, has me grinning insanely!

Okay, my cheeks are starting to hurt.

I adored it! Absolutely LOVED it!

I can't stop clapping hehe

Love it

L

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