omfg thats something i would do as well (the key board thing): heh i feel your pain. man. you did chicken out though. oh well. i still love them

o my. INTENSE! moremoremore please :)

ya i fail. mainly because i don't have a clue where the arby's reference is from. don't like arby's. sorry! but this was so hot. i really really love this story. damn I'M looking forward to Thursday. my hero :)lol

Amazing chapter! I seriously love Hunter and I think he's invading my head because the whole time I was like 'Get out of the relationship...you're not emotionally ready for it!' But then I sat back I was like wait wait wait...didn't he kinda say that? lol...And I don't know why but Ely telling Hunter to tell him that he was the only one that he wanted seemed a little bit creepy...Like he was going to become a crazy, stalker boyfriend... lol probably not though.

OH! And I've never watched ATWT but I've seen some videos about Luka and Noah(?)and they are totally cute! But I've never been able to get into soap operas because they are SO Dramatic lol! But, yes, good chapter! Update ASAP!

aww but i do love me some ely :) he is so geeky in the hot way.. : yes i find (most) geeks hot. ahem. anyway nice chapter!

oh he's falling in love! *squee* wow.

WARNING: i'm totally going to review every chapter. cause i loved this so much. yes i will do that right now. BYE!

hm

i like it! yes. i do. i've decided.

oh and i guess an official welcome is in order. this being your first story and all. so on behalf of.. myself.. welcome to FC! happy to have you :)

Haha. Story of my life. Not so much the gay couple ness... more the "feels like i'm falling in love, when i'm falling to the bathroom floor!" going over and over in my head and being obsessive about nuke... I don't know if you've watched all the videos on youtube... but if you wanna get hardcore there's the user lukevanfan on there who's got like 368 luke and noah videos... I've seen all of them, i'm sorry to say. There was one night me and my friend were up till six in the morning just watching the soap opera. So sad. Yet so addicting. I think Van Hansis is just really really hot. Now I subscribe so whenever they're on I get youtube updates. Sad, I know.

NOW since I've spent a paragraph talking about your AUTHORS NOTE I think I'll say that the chapter was adorably sweet. I kinda like how both Hunter and Eli are thinking the exact same things about their relationship. You know, if the only reason you have for breaking up is that you're TOO in love with each other, I think you're in a pretty good place, you know? and greg. He's my favorite person ever. Feels so great to sign up for the GSA today and then review slash fanfiction. I amaze myself sometimes. So. Update sooner this time.

Greg is so fucking great. I just have to say that. Because I still really like him.

ELY IS SO CUTE AND I WANT TO MARRY HIM EXCEPT NOT REALLY BECAUSE IT SEEMS KIND OF RUDE TO MARRY A GAY GUY WHEN YOU'RE A GIRL, AND ALSO HE HAS A BOYFRIEND AND I should take this off caps now. But. The point was... I LOVE ELY.

That is all. Nice chapter :)

Oh, wait. That's so not even all.

OMG STELLA. Is like. My favorite song. Well, no, I keep changing my mind... but it's definitely up there. I love. That song. Yes I do.

ATWT SPAZ SPAZ SPAZ. Yeah. Well. It's His Terrible Beauty's fault. Cause. In their story, their main character is supposed to look like Van Hansis, and we were like, who's Van Hansis? And then we looked up Van Hansis and were like OHH, HE'S ON A SHOW. And then we proceeded to watch said show. Except. Mostly not. Mostly just on LukeVanFan's youtube channel. Which only shows the Luke/Noah parts. So. Yeah. But seriously, they're in the police station and the hospital so often, you'd think they could get better sets or something.

Anyway. Right. Story. Love it :)

It's okay, I could totally see myself doing something like you did with the back button. Anyway, great story you have here. At first, I just thought hunter was a bit of an ass, but he's really not that bad. And ely is jut adorable (to steal your discription). Looking forward to reading more!

Ciao,

Waffles

Ely is too cute. x3

And I can't really think of anything else to say, other than I'm sorry about your backspace key. o:

This is a seriously awesome story!

Aww, yay, they're in lurve~ _ And don't worry about the chickening out - I thought the chapter ended really well! :D Ah, I love this story so much _ The characters are really cute, he he. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Please keep up the great work! _

So it's almost six in the morning and I decided to check my email before work and I was So happy to see that you updated! So now I will probably be late to work becasue I took the time to read it and leave a review! lol But I honestly don't care because I LOVE this story. I love how Hunter is so addicted to Ely and Ely doesn't really know. They are too cute! But on a side not...how mean of you to leave off just when it was getting good! Update soon!

Ah! I love it! But... *wants lemon* No! Bad me! Wait until Ely is ready... Yes... Wait... Right...

Squee!