i love just seeing how much more he falls in love with eli with every chapter. every time i see this update in my inbox it's like my warm fuzzy break of the day. I NEED IT TO SURVIVE.

Ah! This story is so amazing. I love when I follow something from the first chapter and it turns out really cool. And I really love how there's seriously basically no drama at all yet and yet it makes it really sweet and endearing and just aww... the whole time. Although I'm assuming some drama will follow. Because there's always gotta be drama, or else the story has no conflict, which i think my english teacher told me is important. Update soon! I'm addicted.

OH FAIL. About the backspace key, I mean. LOL.

I HEART THIS CHAPTER. I like Greg. Can I have Greg? Greg is straight, right? Because I like him.

ELYHUNTERSPAZSQUEEOMG. Yes. That is the dictionary dot com word of the the day. Seriously. Or at least, it would be, if I ran that site :) Such a cute chapter. I just adore these boys, even after only six chapters. Ah-mazing. Seriously.

ah they're just like, the cutest thing ever (:

the squee! yet all the squee in the world could not describe the warm and glowy feelings this gives me. i'm off to bed feeling all warm and fuzzy now. love it. XD

Aw, I was SO ready for the sexiitimez. Well. It's okay, because they're adorable, and adorablocity can stay, always, even if there is no sexiitimez. Are no sexiitimez? Whatever.

Cute chapter :)

This story is positively cute! I love our leasing man, and his latest conquest is just adorable. Will he be able to tame him ?

Great depth in the story. I like the choice of words in certain places, makes it sound very poetic. Overall, I love the rich language the best. Great job!

I think Hunter calling Ely 'baby' is really cute! _ Especially since it seems very natural when he says it :) And that chapter didn't appear choppy at all! _ It was really good :D Poor Ely, getting all insecure... But at least now he knows that Hunter won't break up with him just because he's not ready :) I love how attached Hunter is to Ely now! _ It's so sweet :D Looking forwards to the next chapter :) Please keep up the great work!

Aw.

Okay. These 5 chapters can only be described as: Bliss-on-a-stick. lol. hehee. but serriously. it's pretty effing good. and I shall await pataiently for the next installment. )

~Peter

Loved this chapter. I love Hunter, he's interesting. About the nickname thing, I think that sometimes it's cute but then, at the same time, I don't really think that Hunter would call Ely that...It's kind of a sappy name and he doesn't come of as that kind of a person...or well he didn't in the first couple chapters but now...lol...good chapter though!

Ah, this is so great! _ Ely's so adorable, he he XD And I like Hunter too :) Especially since he actually seems to really like Ely _ I can't wait for the next chapter! :D Please keep up the fantastic work!

AH! I like them. They amuse me a lot. I really like this a lot, and I want to read more very badly.

As for the Ely chapter- I think it's fine to keep it where it is now, and not rewrite it in Hunter's POV. Like, if you ever planned to turn this into a book or something, and get it actually published and all, then you would want to change it to keep the flow and stuff, but since this is fictionpress, and god knows how much we all love reading stuff from the love interest's POV, I think it's brilliant right where it is. It really conveys how spastic Ely truly is.

I love it. Can't wait for more!

Haha, Ely, what a spazbucket. I love him.