Reviews for Just Another Nobody |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My bestest friend in the whole wide world, the incomparable Subconscious-Flirt, told me to read this. And you know, I trust her opinion, usually (except for how she thinks Randy Harrison is hotter than Gale Harold. Puh-lease. That's like trying to compare a Labrador and a Terrier- a whole different dog show. They're just not comparable) so I started reading it and I agree, and think it's super cute, and I think you just got one more person added to your following ;) I'm off to read more! I hope it's all as great as it has been! (I laughed at the WASP nest part) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I love these boys, theyre so damn adorable. I could just eat them up...if that weren't completely gross. And I really love that their school is so okay iwth them being gay because that's how it should be and in my school it's totally not like that...Oh and I really love your writing style. Totally going in my favs! Waiting for your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, Hunter's falling in love~ Even if he won't admit it. And o: Can't wait for the next chapter~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha no it's good that it's all pretty much in hunter's pov. While it was great to get into Ely's head for a while (he's just so fucking adorable) there probably wouldn't be a whole lot of story being told :P. Love this chapter, and LOL, sex ed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, i love this! Ely's chapter really was adorably awkward and cute, and it's nice to see both perspectives out there. definitely a new favourite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Famous last words, Ely... Ely's POV was cute, but I do think I like Hunter's chapters better. But it was good to see things from a different perspective. :) I can't wait until next Friday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked it ;D It's so sweet! And Hunter actually ending up liking Ely is really great. The chapter lengths were fine, and your first person would probably beat up mine. I.. don't really like first person. xD I'm more of a third person user BUT... I really liked your first person. Good job! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this. Both Ely and Hunter are endearing. And their somewhat awkward interactions are realistic. Looking forward to reading more ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() xD Yes, I would definitely date Ely. He's so cute! I really can't decide if I like Hunter or not. On one hand, it looks like if he's serious he'll be a good boyfriend, but... on the other hand, he's a little bit of a dick. :/ Maybe that's just me. Um. I had something else to say but I forgot it... SO, um, I like this story. :D |
![]() ![]() Okay. That was really kinda adorable. I would never, ever want a first date to involve eating CRABS, of all things, simply cause it's pretty unattractive to eat :o. Haha but that was really really cute, and I think I'm craving crabs now. |
![]() ![]() You know, I actually quite like this. I like his self-absorption, probably cause we all know how plausible it is haha. Interested to see how this goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I'm really likin this already and it's only two cxhapters long, so I have a feeling I'm going to get really addicted later on. If my spelling is weird right now it's cuz I'm grounded and my dad turned off the Internet so now I've had tow stteal my moms itouch to keep up with foctionpress... Anyhow the fact that j remembered who the people are after only one chapter Is pretty good on your part so keep it up... And I'm assuming ely is pronounced like Eli, just spelled funky. Kay. Done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually really like this story. I like how he's like, "you like me, I know it, let's date." I mean, not completely real world but I think I like it better than all the cliched stuff. Anyhow, it's good. Sweet. And how would you pronounce Ely? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, it's so cute! Something about socially awkward boys is incredibly endearing. xD |