Interesting story. Who'd have thought they'd still be together and mostly problem free? I like both of these characters and think you've done a really nice job of writing them believably.

Yum lol

So, I'm pretty addicted to this already...and I'm going to go read the rest :D

I do like that you're staying away from the cliche (which is something I never do :D) Can't wait to read more. Good thing I've got 18 more chapters to read!

Ely is pretty cute, too. Yeah.

-Ryette

This story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, and causes me to grin stupidly for several minutes after reading.

I would totally read a sequel, and I'm sure you could pull one off just fine if you decide to write it :)

That was very sweet. This story makes me happy. :)

wow, this is the last official chapter? only epilogue left now? I'm happy I could accompany this story's progress as it went on, specially seeing them graduate and ely looking much better from the accident although he still has that scar... I know most doctors would not let a patient have a scar in the face, they normally stretch the skin or sew it in a way that no scar is left because it's the face, so no scar or mark is left... but I kinda understand why he has a scar left because it's a memory of what happened and that he got over, all he complications... so I'm happy :)

hunter thinks its hot, I gotta agree with him, it must give a hot look on ely since he has that cute, uke appearance lol

I'm looking forward to the epilogue!

Amazing chapter! I just love Ely and Hunter so much. I really hope you write a sequel. It's so nice to read a happy story, which isn't filled with angst for the majority of the plot.

Ohmygod, I love you and hate you right now. Gosh. Even though they're fictional, I'm so happy for them. :3 But graduation made me cry because, one, all my friends are graduating, and two, that's me next year. **sniffle**

Anyway. I don't think Ely will ever get old for me, personally. So if you're up to a sequel, and you WANT a sequel, you should write one. :D Besides, it's about what the writer wants, isn't it? XD It's good to have supportive readers, but heck, if I want to write it, I write it, and screw everyone else. Haha, just a thought~

Have fun with your internship!

amazing amazing amazing amazing. reading this story always gives me nice, warm feelings. also, i would definitely not mind a sequel; i am so insatiable and would honestly love to read anything with these characters in it.

Aww~ That's adorable. The paper plates make me laugh. . This was a good chapter. I would be happy to read about their lives in college. Even if people think they are tired and repetitive, I believe it would change with their college life. So I would like to read a sequel, or at least a mini-story about them in college. . Good job!

This chapter was fantastic! I just started reading the story a few weeks ago and got so excited when I say the update, haha! I really loved those last few lines there, I've really loved the entire story so far really. Looking forward to the epilogue! (and the possible sequel)

I really loved this and i definitely squealed when i saw the final update. I AM SO SAD IT'S OVER :(

If you're not feeling too pressed for time next semester please do make a sequel. I don't think i could ever get tired of these two. Not sure why, but i really like them. They're so genuine and not over the top. It's refreshing :)

So ya... excited for the epilogue!

I really love this story and I hate that it's coming to an end but I've discovered that I really don't like sequels. I start out liking them okay but about a quarter to half way in I'm sick of the characters. I like Hunter and Ely so much that I don't want to get sick of them.

Maybe a parallel story with Greg and Marcia with some Hunter and Ely thrown in or some other couple that they are going to school with.

Just a thought.

I kind of think Hunter and Ely are complete and finished. I don't even see the need for an epilog, as much as I like them. You just drew them to a really nice close.

I'd like to see the same effective writing with a whole new situation, myself.

omg i cant believe its almost done. i love them so much. culinary school huh. im in high school still (9th grade) but after i go to college for fashion design i was thinking of going to a culinary school to. since it was my first love. when you a famous chef call me down so we can chat and eat your amazing dishes. (wink wink)