oh, this chapter was so cute with Ely all happy and hunter, who agreed to take him to the prom and it ends up being better than the painful night Greg thought it would be, I guess Marcy helped a lot too with her hilarious personality ;) and Greg admitted he might become a lit less close to Hunter because of Ely but that's life and he'll continue to be his friend and I'm kinda smiling since it's good to know Greg approves them and is happy for them :P

and now I'm really SAD because Ely was in a car crash and boy, it turned into a drama but it's comprehensible and I think Greg should be the one to drive since hunter is too pale and looks ready to pass out any minute... we don't want another accident... because then they could share a room as the crippled boyfriends, what kind of fate would be that?

sorry, I'm rumbling here, but please update soon, I want to know what happened to poor Ely!

I wasn't so sure that I liked this chapter in Greg's point of view but it turned out good.

Please don't let anything bad be wrong with Ely. I don't think I could take this not having a good sappy ending.

I love this story i love this story i love this story. And i love you. But i hate this update? Car crash! I know you aren't cruel but i'm still crossing my fingers so hard that they hurt : Too much stress. Please update soon!

ELY HAD BETTER BE OKAY OR I WILL... I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'LL DO BUT MARK MY WORDS, IT WILL BE TERRIBLE. OMFG POOR BABIES. GOD. Will you just like, hug Hunter for me and tell him everything's going to be okay? If all else fails, he can sell his soul for Ely's life back, right? OMG. Poor Ely. Poor, sweet, darling Ely. OH NO. I am so sad. Ely's gonna be okay, though, right? RIGHT? God. I am way too attached to these poor boys. If I could, I would be waiting tearfully in the hospital waiting room for news :(

On the bright side, I'm really glad you updated. That did make me happy. And the prom was nice. And I really like the Greg-ness. He's a cutie, too.

oh god you just ripped a whole chunk out of my heart, no no no! you can't leave us hanging like this! D:

Oh my god. I was super excited when you posted this. And now I'm already desperately waiting for the next one. I really like Greg. I like Greg even more than I liked Greg before, which really is sort of an accomplishment. I mean, in the beginning I was kind of like aw... it's not about Ely and Hunter, but really it was anyway so all's well in the world.

But seriously, do not wait so long for the next one that I don't remember about the whole car crash thing. My god. Poor Hunter. And Ely, obviously. But that's a frikkin cliffhanger, woman, so HURRY. :P

'ello. One of my reviewers told me that my characters reminded them of yours so I thought I would check it out. I like it. I like it a lot more in these later chapters. Earlier on it seemed like Ely thought he didn't deserve Hunter, and Hunter felt like Ely shouldn't be able to deserve him, even though they both deserve each other. it was pissing me off a little, but its mostly ended.

-Messing With Minds

I just read Chapters 1-16 start to finish in one afternoon, which shows you just how well I liked it. Easy to read, compelling main characters, and fabulous voice. Also, you have a perfect balance of fluff and angst so as to satisfy my desire for both without making things boring.

I was shocked when I got to the end of the first chapter and you said that this was the first time you'd attempted first person. You definitely have a knack for it, as the Hunter character comes across very well through it. My only suggestion (and this kind of relates to what you said about the interludes at the end of this chapter) relates to the way other characters come across via a first person narrative. Be careful in the interludes not to make the other characters sound too similar to Hunter (ie, use similar speaking styles, etc..). It's also easy in first person to make peripheral characters a little boring, like for example Amy comes across as a bit one-dimensional just cause we don't know anything about her.

In any case, these are just things that I learned from my first attempt at first person that may or may not help you at all. Your story really is quite good, and I'm excited to read more!

-Andrea Fierce

Nice chapter :)

It's funny, I don't know if that's how your district actually is about senior pranks, but ours was...ohmygoodness super crackdown seniors-can't-have-any-fun-ever. The senior class TP'd the on-campus (campus? property?) house, and homecoming was almost cancelled. Then, the seniors and juniors switched sides of the gym in a mandatory spirit rally, and the assemblies for the rest of the week were cancelled or shortened.

Crazy stuff.

I really enjoy this story! Maybe I've said that before...but it's true. Very cute, happy-making.

It makes me sad that this is almost over :( Very very sad indeed.

I don't know what it is about them but they're just so cute and natural and believable and... -sigh- I'm rambling slightly.

It'll be cool to see them from Greg's POV! I'm sure he'll have a lot to say ;)

Until next time (which it hopefully extremely soon)

! I am so happy right now. Ely and Hunter, they just make me so happy. All the time. Except when they were being sad, but they're not, now, so they're happy, so I'm happy. And yay for the college thingy. That makes me happy, too.

They're just so cute and cuddly and make me smile and be like, "Aw!" whenever I read about them :D

Nice chapter!

Hi,

I like this story. It's really nice. I usualy don't review stories 'cause i'm so lazy.. but i had to do this because on your chapter 9 in the end you wrote "Hoshit it is eight minutes to four. Why am i not asleep?" And after that i checked my clock. and surprise surprise it was 3.52.. D what are the chances to that } Love your writings.. keep it up!

Thanks

Just wanted to say I really love this story, and can't wait for the next chapter. You're a great writer :)

C: Hope eli decides to go to Quinifneugfsng ( to lazy to scroll up and find the word).

Is the story going to go as far as college? I really do hope so... XD Love this story.

An update! Yay! Ahaha...Just looked at a review I left a few chapters ago (to make sure I'd reviewed before) and in it, I'd said it was 3am. Well, it's about 3am right now. So...

Anyways. This story continues to be pretty adorable and enjoyable. It's a nice read...And suddenly Hunter became James Franco in my head and I can't say I'm complaining, haha. So thanks for updating and not abandoning your lovely story like so may FictionPress authors have been doing lately, to our dismay.

You're great. :)