Wow...I love these guys! Man, Ely is crazy~

Hey, I've heard of that Lawn Gnome idea. I think that would actually be funny. Something like that happened to my grandma's friend. She woke up and the lawn gnome was gone and they found it in someone else's yard...I've heard the story quite a few times...Anyway, at least Ely didn't get really stupid and start making out with someone else...that would be bad, very bad.

Oh, and a thing for the author's note: I do that way too often...Staying up early just seems to happen because I can't sleep properly until at least like 2 or 3am...So I totally understand where you are coming from. So thanks for putting up with the morning hours to post this!

Aw. "My Hunter." Aw. Ely is like, the cutest thing of all time. And drunk Ely? Fuck yes. I love it. Oh my god. I wish this chapter had come out before nominations ended at lats, because I totally would have nominated it for best under the influence scene. Because it's fucking the best thing ever. I was thinking about this story, and I was like, what even HAPPENS, because they're already together? But somehow, you still manage to have plot. I really like that about this story- that the whole plot isn't about them getting together, it's about them BEING together. I don't know. I just really really like them.

Oh my god, I can't get over drunk Ely. He's adorable. "why is my decorative orb on the Scott-es-es lawn?" Oh my god, I just want to hug him.

Love it :)

Hunter is soo cute taking care of ely lik that...and ely's cute when he's drunk as well...:) i cant wait for more

Yay...first timer sex...:P loved it :) update soon :D

That was great. You managed to make it a smexy scene without using 50 different words for a guy's anatomy. :P (Seriously, some of the scenes on this site...) :P

Okay, well, that answered those questions. Ely's adorable. Makes me wanna squish him. :P

This looks cute so far. Do you pronounce Ely Ellee or Eli? (Like Elijah?) Or something else? :)

BEAUTIFUL. Fucking beautiful. It just exudes their essence, you know? It wasn't so graphic that it seemed out of character, but it wasn't like "and once it was over..." It was perfect. It fit them perfectly. Ely just like, owns my soul. I'd give Hunter some other part of me, too, but all of me is mostly feminine, and I can't see him liking that TOO much. He can just have the Sweetly Badass Award. Because he's really badass in a sweet way.

Love the chapter. You rock.

SO you're really not going to tell me what happened on Thursady?...ah, oh well...anyways! I loved this chapter. I liked how awkward Hunter was even though he kinda thinks he's a pro and I love how Ely knew what he was doing. They are just too cute and perfect for eachother. Though it was a little sad that they had sex before they admitted to each other that they love each other (cuz they so obviously do)..thats realistic but still sad...but super good and I can't wait for the next chapter!

PS: I only really write at night too...during the day I get writers block. lol...and that sucks about your computer

AHH i dont care about the lacking of sex scene. IT WAS ADORABLE (: i love how hunter is all like WAS THAT SERIOUSLY YOUR FIRST TIME? xDD b'aww.

Yay! Loved it. They are too cute.

WOMAN YOU GIVE ME THE FUZZIES.

it's a compliment, really. as ever, update cheered me up at the end of a bad day. YAY LOVE.

sex fiend ely is hawt. super hawt. rawr! made my tuesday for sure :P now if only you'd update everyday (?) ;)

Aww _ So cute, he he. And I don't think you missed over a whole lot - it was really good! :D They're adorable :) Please keep up the great work! :D

I usually lose my interest in most stories when the characters "finally get together," so I was a bit surprised when that happened so soon in this one, but I'm glad I kept reading. The whole happy-couple thing doesn't usually do it for me, but for some reason I really like hearing about Ely and Hunter's relationship developing. It's just so cute!