Reviews for Sonnet I
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Brilliant. Speechless.
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Love it- its so demanding... if you know what I mean? :)
emmaaalouiseee chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Sonnets are very hard to write.

But you wrote this one perfectly.

Well done, this was very powerful.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
WOW, I'm really really impressed! Sonnets are really hard to write. (at least for me apparently Shakspeare didn't have any problems)This is descriptive and lovely and just a hint of darkness. A perfect sonnet blend. Very very well done. Not many ppl can write a sonnet and few of those ppl can write a good one. And then their are those (such as yourself) who write great ones. Very good!
Mary Eliraz chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
wow. powerful.

"Alas, I know that this case you will win,

Although 'twas you who begged for us to sin."

beautiful. but definitely not the only lines i liked - i would end up copy and pasting the whole thing if i had to pick out my favorites, though. really good.