Reviews for Memor Mihi
Kitten Arcane chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
It seems forced, at some parts. The rhythm is thrown of too. But the overall concept, I can tell is very close to your heart. Pretending to be someone for the simple fear of rejection by society; we fear what's different and don't try to understand it, and so we reject it in doing so. My favorite lines, "Carefully avoiding a slip of the tongue

Cuz one wrong move and you’re done".

Well done, cricket! *That's right, you're STILL not a blackwidow XD* Keep writing! (So we don't end up hobos)

Alien M