Reviews for What I Found In My Locker |
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![]() ![]() ![]() haha funny plus really sweet one |
![]() ![]() Cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW dis is CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE |
![]() ![]() Oh my god. That was so fucking adorable. I, oh my god... I think I just exploded into various multicolored sparkles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not an insult or anything, but my favourite part was your author's note. Bravo! That was a delicious read, funny short and perfect in fluff. If you'd dipped it in more cheese, it would have been gag-worthy but the mixture of fluff and cute and cheese was JUST right. Also, your writing? Holy wow woman! NOT ONE MISTAKE? NOT EVEN ONE TEENY GRAMMAR MISTAKE? You got skills. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That has to be the best one shot I've ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, hun! This is Melissa from A Drop of Romeo. Your story has been added to the site under the One Shot category! Here's your review: Melissa Thinks: I think many of us fantasize about a boy leaving flowers in our lockers and in geeky Lucy's case, that's exactly what happened. She heads to her locker in between classes to find different amounts of red and white roses each time. Together, her and the boy who has the locker adjacent to hers, try to find the mystery rose leaver. Although a tad predictable, What I Found In My Locker was a basket of cuteness. I loved the interactions between Lucy and Locker Guy, and their characters as well. There were almost no mistakes and the writing had a strong voice. There was a nice balance of fluff, not too much so as to ward off the more realistic story lovers. It was a very simple, yet gratifying to read. It's short enough so that anyone can take the time to read it. You can breeze through rather quick, so this is definitely one for those with thick schedules |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazin |
![]() ![]() ![]() eheheh Locker Guy was Rose Guy! X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. Oh sweet heavens this was adorable. Swoon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute. I like this story a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww this is adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so cute! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was REALLY cute. I love Locker Guy. I mean...Rose Dude. I mean...Gabriel. Heh. Very nicely done; I love the idea and your writing style! Kudos. (: (I'm adding this to my C2.) |