|Reviews for The Vow|
| Amanda S chapter 11 . 5/8/2010
Invisible no more! hello, hello I have to say that I am liking this story a lot except I am not all to excited about Clark's POV it doesn't seem in sync with the story and for some reason I find his thoughts are a bit jumbled and unorganized. But I do appreciate the change of pace in the story. I feel the initial plot of the story(dell's memory lapse) is sort of flagging. I only think this because there is a lot of her asking and wondering and Clark not telling but there is nothing to go on from there. I think some more subtle hints should be thrown in there like people she met from that night talking to her or her ex dropping a couple of hints. Other than that, I really do like this story, and I can't wait to read more!
P.S I am also a big, big fan of Just Mia and I would like to know the status on that story:D you are an amazing writer Koodos to you
| fluff.flower chapter 11 . 5/7/2010
Haha, you caught me.
| foodieriana chapter 11 . 5/7/2010
Aw man! You got me. I am one of your invisible readers... This chapter was good, but not one of my favorites. I didn't expect Clark's POV to sound like that, it surprised me, but I liked it. Boys will boys, I guess.
| rosieroo chapter 11 . 5/6/2010
yayy! i do love updates! and she wants them to be together? why the sudden change? hopefully itll be in the next chapter!
| Soen22 chapter 11 . 5/5/2010
hrm...well, it seems as if the way he talks all he wants to do is get in her pants and then get out of her life. Which I know is not how you want to portray him, the way he's so eager for him really makes him sound a tad douchey which I know is probably not the way you wanted to portray him.
| scharlie18 chapter 11 . 5/5/2010
Oh, Mickey, what a pity
You don't understand
You take me by the heart
When you take me by the hand
Oh, Mickey, you're so pretty
Can't you understand
It's guys like you, Mickey
Oh, what you do, Mickey, do, Mickey
Don't break my heart, Mickey
Random song to prove that I'm NOT invisible! :P
| thefrogsareattacking chapter 11 . 5/4/2010
Good chapter -D
| iluvodie chapter 11 . 5/4/2010
dang it . i never expected the last part. :groans: i wanna read more. lol XD
| queenehlana chapter 11 . 5/4/2010
:D aww! I'm so happy! Awesome chappie as usual! I can't wait til you update again!
| maya chapter 11 . 5/4/2010
hi! I have to be honest, this wasn't really my favorite chapter. except the end. I liked the end.
| findingguidance chapter 10 . 5/4/2010
It wouldn't let me review on the last chapter for some reason.
Anyway, I really enjoyed getting into clark's mind. I know he is dealing with some shady stuff from her memory loss, but I didn't really expect him to be such an ass... I dunno I guess I expected him to be less shallow, but of course he is in high school, lol.
guess this should be realistic ;-)
| millienmile chapter 11 . 5/3/2010
Ugh i'm seriously running out the door to go to an exam so this is gonna be real quick. i like i like i like :P
| Rainclouds and Sunbeams chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Sat down for ? hours to read all that is published so far. I problly should go do my homework.
| shoe-aholic chapter 11 . 5/3/2010
i couldn't write a review normally because it says i've already written a review for this chapter S that's strange cos i really haven't but still, anyway, just wanted to say that i'm gald you updated! clark is really funny in this chapter- love it!
| lostlette chapter 11 . 5/3/2010