Reviews for The Vow
fluff.flower chapter 11 . 5/7/2010
Haha, you caught me.
foodieriana chapter 11 . 5/7/2010
Aw man! You got me. I am one of your invisible readers... This chapter was good, but not one of my favorites. I didn't expect Clark's POV to sound like that, it surprised me, but I liked it. Boys will boys, I guess.
rosieroo chapter 11 . 5/6/2010
yayy! i do love updates! and she wants them to be together? why the sudden change? hopefully itll be in the next chapter!
Soen22 chapter 11 . 5/5/2010
hrm...well, it seems as if the way he talks all he wants to do is get in her pants and then get out of her life. Which I know is not how you want to portray him, the way he's so eager for him really makes him sound a tad douchey which I know is probably not the way you wanted to portray him.
scharlie18 chapter 11 . 5/5/2010
Oh, Mickey, what a pity

You don't understand

You take me by the heart

When you take me by the hand

Oh, Mickey, you're so pretty

Can't you understand

It's guys like you, Mickey

Oh, what you do, Mickey, do, Mickey

Don't break my heart, Mickey

Random song to prove that I'm NOT invisible! :P
thefrogsareattacking chapter 11 . 5/4/2010

Good chapter -D
iluvodie chapter 11 . 5/4/2010
dang it . i never expected the last part. :groans: i wanna read more. lol XD
queenehlana chapter 11 . 5/4/2010
:D aww! I'm so happy! Awesome chappie as usual! I can't wait til you update again!
maya chapter 11 . 5/4/2010
hi! I have to be honest, this wasn't really my favorite chapter. except the end. I liked the end.
findingguidance chapter 10 . 5/4/2010
It wouldn't let me review on the last chapter for some reason.

Anyway, I really enjoyed getting into clark's mind. I know he is dealing with some shady stuff from her memory loss, but I didn't really expect him to be such an ass... I dunno I guess I expected him to be less shallow, but of course he is in high school, lol.

guess this should be realistic ;-)
millienmile chapter 11 . 5/3/2010
Ugh i'm seriously running out the door to go to an exam so this is gonna be real quick. i like i like i like :P
Rainclouds and Sunbeams chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Sat down for ? hours to read all that is published so far. I problly should go do my homework.
shoe-aholic chapter 11 . 5/3/2010
i couldn't write a review normally because it says i've already written a review for this chapter S that's strange cos i really haven't but still, anyway, just wanted to say that i'm gald you updated! clark is really funny in this chapter- love it!


lostlette chapter 11 . 5/3/2010
o, wow.
renegade01 chapter 11 . 5/3/2010
that clark is a sneaky one... great story and i hope you update soon. ;)

for 11 chapters dude, you have a heck of a lot more reviews than most stories on here...
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