Reviews for untitled 204
electrical moon chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Lovely! I particularly like the first four lines.
Isca chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
"Your eyes in the blue-dark of morning." I must say, this line swept me up in a whirlwind of grace. It's one of those lines that stick with you for the rest of your life because it's so beautiful. Wow. :D

"But so heaven-shaped." Heaven-shaped! Good God! That's downright brilliant! Excellent use of kenning.

"And its companion-hope." Honestly, this is the best poem I've read in awhile. I hope you can find a title for it one day. Keep up the amazing work!