Reviews for Cry
MysticGypsyGirl chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
That was so beautiful! It really captured these true emotions!
Amaury chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
This is so sad. But stunning. Nice job.
Isca chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
This poem's message is powerful. It's good to let your emotions take over sometimes-it's often the only way to heal. Keep up the good work. :)
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
this is a very touching poem!

"I really feels I'm invisible and everybody can see me" is a great descption (though it is a paradoxon)

Hope you feel better after having cried

Franziska
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
"somebody will hear and come to you to heal

every wound that pierces your broken body."

I loved that part, very true and very beautifully chosen words. Cool poem! D
MoonlightRouge chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I love you poem it's beautiful yet sad

nice keep it up
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Aw wow beautiful poem! 2nd stanza 1st line remove 's' from 'feels'? Write on!

Anna _
Katie Sarah chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
It good.

I like it, well done :]