XD hilarious! "Sorry, but the girlfriend won this time" it's so... win! lol! Yeah, your idea is totally unthinkable for me. And Victoria is a bitch. It's obvious that she wanted to break them up. In any other stories about this theme, usually the best friend is the goody goody two shoes :P oh well, what a fresh breaking point. I kinda realize how the girlfriend should feel... it's so true.
and hilarious of course! :P
Eric is so sweet, I like him. If you finally hook her up with Eric, I would be okay, and scream "YESSSS! YESS!"
but Tommy is fine. And, finally.. he is not so clueless anymore. Fiuh.
Keep writing :D

I love how you did it from the girlfriend's point of view. And you didn't make her a bitch. Really nice and well written.

That was really good! Love the girlfriend perspective and the insecurities that you show. Finally, a guy who likes the curves, woot woot! P Gosh, he was a bit slow on the uptake wasn't he? As if he didn't see what the bitch Victoria was doing! But yeah, great story, absolutely loved it.

OMG I have been planning to write a story like that hehehehe :3 But I think I wont, cos mine won't be nearly as good as how you've written this one shot :D:D:D

I had tears rolling down my face - especially when they saw each other at the movies TT TT

Written so well

I love it...~ I'm not usually one to read one shots - but I loved your summary as well Very enticing

I love this story I could read it over and over again. I've never understood this cliche. I mean, every girl gets a big crush on one of her guy friends and thinks they'll end up together despite whoever he's dating, and sometimes they do, but what happens when you're the girlfriend and some other girl is following him around like a puppy dog? Haha, I love it.:)

You brought up an amazing point that I didn't even see when you asked why it was always the girlfriend that the guy left for his best friend. I actually started crying, because you're right. No one deserves that. Definitely on my favorites!

I LIKE ERIC! (;_;) I really do. :( He's so sweet and loveable~ :) HAHAHAHA. Sorry! I know he's just a minor character, but still! I wouldn't mind reading a story about him, *hint, hint*. ;)

It was sweet. :) I liked how you broke the cliche and went against what the world thinks.

(But I like Eric. Really. He's my favorite character.)

Excellent, excellent, excellent! I'll admit, I'm way tired of the best friend bitchy girlfriend cliche. I mean it's fine and all but it gets more than a little annoying and it also feels a little like feminist fail. So this was really refreshing and I like that she gave the best friend the benefit of doubt when I'm pretty sure the best friend wouldn't have. I kind of wanted her to go with Eric cause he seemed like a win sort of guy cause hey, he brought shit out in the open. However I'm glad that Tommy also came back to his senses pretty soon. Awesome story and I'm favoriting as soon as I log in. Great job! :)

All I have to say to this is...FINALLY.

I loved it. I loved your views on the whole situation and that the best friend was the bitch and (you) were not. I'm glad the girlfriend won this time. I think you did an excellent job on this one-shot and for that it's going on my favorites. :)

I really like this one. It completely went against the whole best friendgood girl and girlfriendvillain cliche. For once, the best friend was the bitch. It a really good story!

oh, i loved that. he called his best friend 'bony and gross', kinda mean but she was apparently a bitch. good job.

I really liked this and thought it was a great story. I love your take on the the whole best friend versus girlfriend. I'm glad the girlfriend won this time and the best friend was really a b*. Excellent writing, it is always good to read a story that is well written.

i like your plot, its new and really cute, and its out of the ordinary, it really good, love it! ;P

Nice story. It's interesting and I'm not the type of person who usually reads romance. Hope you update soon.